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wow i hope mione helps harry out with dudley and his famliy ... please please update soon.. later for now
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apaidanSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 10/08/08
excellent surprise. I'm curious how Petunia knew to contact Remus, but I'm certain that will be explained later.
Oh, my. That exchange between the two of them was good. And they haven't a clue. I really like how you're layering this very nicely |
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apaidanSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 10/08/08
Remus still being here is interesting, should make for an interesting meeting. I like how you have Petunia regretting things that happened between her and Lily and her and Harry, hopefully she'll kick Vernon to the curb when he reacts badly to Mary.
Thanks for posting this, I'll have to reread your other stories to see why someone mistakenly thought they were flameworthy |
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apaidanSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 10/08/08
a very good scene between Dudley and Ally. Nice way to show how he's still dealing with his upbringing and how if impacted him.
With the club scene, I like how you take the two of them and have them trying to get back what they once had. |
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apaidanSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/08/08
a very interesting beginning. Harry ditches Ginny before a date, Ron & Hermione have broken up, Hermione's the only one who can get into Harry's fortress of solitude, and they're going out on the town (not to a strip club). I'm very interested in seeing where this story goes. So far, it's very interesting |
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witowsmpSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 10/08/08
I'm glad that Harry has now met Dudley's family. It was cute how Mary was waiting at the door.
It was funny how Hermione immediately withdrew her hand when she found out the identity of their guest.
I look forward to the next chapter. |
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HelloUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 10/08/08
awesome. what else is there to say? I love the buildup you have and love the characterizations. The Harmony moments make my heart melt |
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KergmaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/08
It's been four days and no update?! Shame on you! lol |
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hpfan2009Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/07/08
I like the story. Can't wait to read more. Do you know how long this story will be? |
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I'm really enjoying this so far and can't wait to read more! |
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someguySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/06/08
Amazing story, just wondering when we'll see an update. Great story that deserves to be flushed out completely.
Great job!!! |
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LeolupinSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 21/06/08
This is a good story, I'm looking forward to more. And don't worry about flamers, the fact that they don't just stop reading and move on with their live but instead of committing themselves to read something they don't like shows how petty and ignorent they really are. It's their problem they can't work up the nerve to grow up and move on with their lives, and shouldn't take it out on you. |
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Oh this is really interesting! I love the back and forth between Dudley and Harry, I'm very excited for them to meet. Your writing is fantastic, really fun portraits of two very different 20 somethings' lives. The changes in Dudley seem incredibly organic which in my opinion is hard to do, so bravo! I look forward to reading more. |
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TheHardSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 07/06/08
Nice advance, but just a little short... I really like this new Dudders, can't wait for that confrontation between him and Harry & Co.
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I really like the story so far! The H/Hr thing at the end of chappie 2 was very sentimental (even though you might think otherwise) and liked the conv. btween Duds and his mum. Well done. |
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