jabbaSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 08/05/08
This is so very lovely.
The problem I have with the last two books is the relationship between Harry and Hermione seemed to go all wonky. So I absolutly love stories like this that fix that thing that broke between these two.
Great job! |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 08/05/08
Er...is this finished? I mean, they don't end up together...  |
Author Feedback: The story was much more about their friendship than a future romance. I felt like it was pretty clear that even though they weren't actually 'together,' that there were already feelings planted. I would write more, but Potential is more than enough work for me right now. |
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RosaliSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/05/08
It was nice. I was expecting somehting more, but maybe it is because it's only the first chapter.
Let's see...
Cheers!
Rosali |
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Well done! I applaud mainly the fact that you wrote from both's point of view, that makes it more fanciable, to me at least. Luv it  |
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Wow I like this, it is nicely written, the plot is interesting  |
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Ended? Really? Ow... I was hoping for more... Ok... is not that i dont like it... i like it and I want more.... lol |
Author Feedback: I would consider making it a full-blown story, but I'm already committed to another story, Potential. It follows a similar pattern if you're interested in how my stories progress.
Thanks for reading! |
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papermaskSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/04/08
Aww, yay. This was sweet. I urge you to continue this, and to bring out H/Hr more. Very beautiful story. |
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EvernightSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/04/08
Very nice fic, a continuation for this story would be welcomed! Keep it up! |
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sorry, forgot to add a chapter alert for this, not a review. |
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Is that it????
Nothing more!!!
It seems that Hermione feels something for Harry and so does harry. Are you going to put that here, or not.. |
Author Feedback: I am toying with the idea of adding a companion chapter, but it will have to wait until I finish the next chapter of Potential.
Thanks for reviewing! |
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/04/08
Quite the gentle story and I can just see Hermione slowly and gently bringing Harry out of his shell of isolation. Of course, I rather suspect there's more here than just helping a friend; she comes across as having more than just friendly feelings for Harry and it looks like her feelings are returned. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/04/08
Nice little piece, I really loved it. Good way to show their deep bond, deeper than any of the Weasleys can ever hope to be with them. |
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hehehe, cute... I like it, simple short and naive... its good for a change... |
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