MikeeUnsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 19/04/08
oh my goodness!!!  this story is one of the best fics i've ever read! i love it! GREAT JOB! |
Author Feedback: And you're welcome. 
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You know how sometimes you have this emotion in your head but when you try to write it down or tell someone else about it, it gets all muddled and bland? When I read this it was as if I got a firsthand view into Hermione's soul - what she felt was what I felt, no muddiness, no dilution - just pure, intense, emotion. Great work. |
Author Feedback: Truth be told, yes, I do know the feeling, and the frustration that comes with writing it down on paper...and admittedly, I do have trouble with it myself...in this story I focused more on Hermione's viewpoint, and not as much on the plot, that's why it's a bit weaker...
Yet, I'm glad you enjoyed it as much as you say you did...emotion is the essence of writing, and I thank you for reading and reviewing... |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 18/04/08
Oh wel that answered my question. She was seveenteen when she met Harry. How to be young and lovely like that again. Great job. I really liked this. I have read a few of your stories and this is been my favorite so far. Great job. |
Author Feedback: Your favourite? Really, I am flattered you say that...I thought this story has too many bugs in it...
Still, I'm glad you enjoyed it...thanks for reading and reviewing. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 18/04/08
That's very interesting. Great job. I absoulutely loved this chapter. It was very very good. Extremely sad that Harry had to die, but I'm not surprised. Lovely job. |
Author Feedback: I'm happy you liked it, though I do have to read them through more carefully before posting...
Thanks for reviewing. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 18/04/08
Well that was very quick. A little bit different fromt eh story. Great job at this though. I really enjoyed this. Is Hermione about 20 or so? How old is she? |
Author Feedback: Yeah, that chapter was a bit too fast, even for my liking...Hermione is actually 17 in this story. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 18/04/08
That was very interesting. Great job on that chapter. I really enjoyed it. Great job. I cannot wait to read more. |
Author Feedback: Interesting? Agreed...I had fun writing that chapter... |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 18/04/08
Very interesting. You are quite good at capturing the way that they spoke back then. Very nice job. I definitely see a lot of simliarities between the movie and the story. Can't wait to see more differences. |
Author Feedback: I tried to keep as close to the movie as possible, but there are some differences...and yeah, I do have a knack for eloquent speech, at least to an extent...
Glad you like it. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/04/08
Oh this should be good. I haven't ever read a Titanic/Harry P crossover. Great job. I cannot wait to read more of this. |
Author Feedback: Gah, finally time to get to the replies...
I haven't seen a Titanic/HP either...so I decided to write one.  |
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Good adaptation of the movie's plot with our favorite characters...it was just as sad a promised. Great job writing even if I hate sad endings. Can't wait what fic you are going to come up with next. |
Author Feedback: Thank you!
I'm very happy you liked it, despite your aversion to sad endings...I appreciate it nevertheless.
As for my next stories...I'll update FC: A Second Turn first, and then getting down to the sequel for A Strike Upon the Hour...
Thanks for reading and reviewing. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 18/04/08
so, is her name hermione or rose? you kept switching it |
Author Feedback: Hermione is her name. I got confused when I was writing the story and watching the movie at the same time. It's an embarrassing mistake, which I apologize for, but it's too late to change it... |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 17/04/08
Despite it being 10 years since the movie was released... despite this movie being done to death I've never seen it done with HP.
The story does actually fit with the characters... I can see Harry and Hermione playing Jack and Rose. Although for the record it would be better if you stuck to either "Rose" or Hermione for her name... you alternated a lot during the story.
Two epic stories... combined into one. Good job. |
Author Feedback: Never? I tend to break new ground.
The name changes have been pointed out, and I'm feeling rather embarrassed from the mistake...blame watching the movie and writing at the same time...
Still, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. |
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dexter19Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 17/04/08
you referred to mister weasly as mr.granger...its a good fic...havent read any HP/Titanic Xover so far not bad at all |
Author Feedback: I know...I also referred to Hermione as Rose...an embarrassing mistake on my part, for which I apologize...
Glad you're enjoying so far. |
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KatUnsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 17/04/08
I've read some of your other stuff and enjoyed it. However, I was not overly impressed with the way you've blatantly plagiarized the Titanic movie this time.
I thought it would have made an interesting premise had you adapted the wizard world into the story and made it your own, but you didn't.
And to be very honest, you've violated several copyright laws by plagiarizing the Titanic movie script. |
Author Feedback: Undeniably, I did consult the movie and the script in the writing of this story, but if you notice, I've put a disclaimer before the first chapter"
"Disclaimer: I lay claim to nothing…JK's characters, and James Cameron's film and plot are not of my design…"
I know I haven't made up the movie about the Titanic, nor the script, and I have said so - so the charge of plagiarism really doesn't hold here.
On the note of making an HP/Titanic crossover...I really, really, don't think it will work as expected...not that I can't do it, but it would make for a horrible story. Though, if you want a crack at it, you're more than welcome to give it a shot. :/
Thanks for reading and reviewing, never-the-less. |
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My lip is trembling, honestly. This has to be one of the saddest things I've read on Portkey... Amazingly, wonderfully, beautifully written, but oh-so-sad...
Spectacularly written! |
Author Feedback: Trembling? Wow...didn't think the story would be that powerful...
Your words flatter me immensely still...thanks for reading and reviewing. |
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This is really quite good. I just read all the chapters and I was hanging on every word. Though I have to ask, why is Hermione refered to as Rose, in parts of the chapters?
This is really great, I can't wait to read more of your work.
---Sirius |
Author Feedback: The reason for the name confusion is that I was watching the movie, reading the script and writing at the same time, to keep the plot as straight as possible, and focusing on everything at once has caused me to slip by accident...I apologize.
Though I'm glad you liked the story ...my other work is a click away, and thanks for reading and reviewing.
-gti88 |
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