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WUV WOOOOO
sooo beautiful soo angsty and soo romantic a combinations rarely seen.
the ending was rushed a bit so it ruined the effect but all in all superb fic |
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vlbuehleSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 29/06/08
Great ending, as always. I liked Harry's absolute awkwardness on the dance floor, and his determination to confess everything. I liked Hermione's amusement, and that she forgave him and then moved straight into going out with him. The fact that they were so caught up in each other that they didn't notice they were the only ones left dancing was great. I also enjoyed the ending, and how you summed everything up without cutting it short, leaving some lovely images about their relationship. |
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vlbuehleSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 29/06/08
I loved that one of Harry's primary reasons for staying with Ginny was that everyone said they looked good together--that cracked me up even as I winced at it. Poor Harry. Ron was absolutely fantastic; I adored his amusement at Harry's rants, how he let Harry get it out of his system, and his utter bluntness when he called Ginny a selfish cow. And Ginny's initial refusal to "let" Harry break up with her was as astonishing as it was amusing. I'm looking forward to seeing how Harry handles all of this. |
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gakSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 28/06/08
I enjoyed your story. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. |
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nobitaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/06/08
Chapter 1 is argubly the best beginning of a HHr story I've read, very emotional and good angst~ The intensity sorts of cools down the following chapters but that doesn't prevent this story from being one of my favourite HHr short fic! |
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MionefanSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 25/05/08
Ah, a good ending. I still expected Ginny to do something nasty though. |
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MionefanSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 25/05/08
Oh that went well! Actually, I thought Ginny would try to hex him on the spot. Good writing though. |
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MionefanSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 25/05/08
OK, I've been following this and really like it. It's a bit different than I imagined, but well written. Can't believe Harry has been so thick about this for so long. It should have been obvious to him since forever. |
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A very nice story! My favourite chapter was the one with Hermione's parents in it. A much more natural and interesting scene than any I've read with Hermione's parents. I think I've missed a few of your newer stories, but I'm off to read them now. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 08/05/08
That was very interesting. I liked the ending. There were a couple of typos, but nothing too horrible. I wanted to know what happened with Ginny, but whatever. I hope that everything was alright with her. Maybe she found some certain blond-haird Slytherin.
I liked the ending and how Hermione didn't take it slow. It's nice to know that she said "to hell with it" |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 08/05/08
Well I wonder what Ginny is going to do. I am glad that he broke up with her and told her he didn't' love her. Great job. I absolutely loved how Ron was the voice of reasoning. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 08/05/08
I absolutely loved the ending of this chapter. I am glad that Ron is all for this and he realizes that his sister is stupid. Very lovely job at this. I thought it was quite brilliant |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 08/05/08
Well this was very interesting to see the muggle side of Hermione. We never got to see that in the books. Great job. I really enjoyed this. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/05/08
This seems very interesting. This is how it should've happened. Oh stupid seventh book. Lovely job at this. I really enjoyed this. I cannot wait to read more. |
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ears91Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 04/05/08
Very nice story. I did like Ron's conversation with Harry last chapter, its always nice to see him slightly more mature then he ever was in the books. |
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