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poor neville, i really hope he finds someone nice- not necessarily ginny but someone nice
lol about the dbz moment, that was funny and i'm definately looking forawrd to the next chapter and seeing harry and herminoe finally go out on their date
also, yay for ron and luna's kiss, that was perfect though i do wish that luna still had her plant but the banana milkshake lip gloss suits her
excellent job, update soon please |
Author Feedback: I think everyone is waiting for H/Hr to go on their date. There's not much H/Hr in this fic at all, but this last chapter is going to be all about the harmony! And yes, Neville will get someone, ehhe. You didn't honestly think I'd leave the poor guy?
I did consider Luna still having the plant, but I had to dispense with it for the kisses' sake. I think Ron would have had a lot to complain about if tentacles got in the way.
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Author Feedback: Haha, I used to watch it when I was younger, so I couldn't help myself.
Malfoy is rather annoying, but sadly he had to be. It quite breaks my heart to not have my favourite couple come together, but for this story it just doesn't work.
I do think Ron and Luna are cute together. They're one of the ships I really like but hardly write simply because I can only do extreme fluff with them, lol.
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kwl chap but i am sad 2 see tht the story shall end i relly enjoyed readin it plz keep writing u rok  |
Author Feedback: Unfortunately all stories must end at some point, but I'm glad you liked it so much 
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 22/04/08
man why does malfoy have to just but in, i hate that conceited bastard. sorry for language. i felt sad when neville felt out of place. i kinda know how he feels. left out. experienced it. they do invite you but then you just get ignored. hope ginny picks wisely. dont let neville lose to that conceited jerk. sure he help but what does he want out of it. ginny your smart hello figure it out neville likes you... malfoy has no part in this. hes just extra luggage. why is he there in the first place. oh and i love that dragon ball moment. im a fan of dbz. |
Author Feedback: haha, don't worry, Nev isn't going to be left out of this one.
Lol, the DBZ moment was purely inspirational. I used to watch the cartoon religiously when I was younger, so I can't help but throw in little things like that.
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 22/04/08
Well, it seems Neville lost the race, but you can never tell. Ginny wasn't overly impressed with the fact that Draco was flirting with her, even if she did blush and such.
As for Cho and Krum, they probably will attempt something else, but will be thwarted by Ron and the others. |
Author Feedback: Indeed you just can never tell sometimes.
Lol, Cho and Krum remind me of Team Rocket from Pokemon, never giving up but always getting it wrong.
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First of all, thanks for the update - I'm glad that even though you are not feeling s inspired that you are still taking the time to update the story for us loyal readers. The chapter was great - liked the Ron/Luna encounter as well as the Neville/Ginny/Draco triangle. Couldn't even tell that you were feelingless than inspired!  I can't wait to see what bungled planning Vikkie and Cho will come up with and of course, I would love to see a little more Harmony! Here's hoping the inspiration hits and I am looking forward to updates on all my favorite stories of yours! |
Author Feedback: Well I only have a few days left of my break before I go back to uni, so I'm trying to update everything at least before then, because after that it's back to assignments.
I'm glad you liked the chapter, and the next chapter is all about the harmony 
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 22/04/08
I love it.
Draon ball Z is a cool show I use to wich it but they took it off tv why they all ways do that?
i all so like Tiny Toons,Loony Tunes and Animaniacs and Tom & Jerry.
I all so like Disney too not just Warner Bothers or HB that's Hana bAra.
Sorry about the spelling.
I hpe that you will continue this wonderful & excellent story. But now it's time to for me to go to bed but before I do here is the sondtrack of Loony Tunes to end this commet called Merry Go Round Broke it Down.
Tha tha tha tha tha tha tha tha tha tha tha that's all folks!  |
Author Feedback: Yes, it is a shame how they always seem to do that.
I will be continuing it, and thank you again for reviewing! I really appreciate it |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 22/04/08
Ahhhhhh suspense!!!! I feel so bad for neville though such a sweet guy.... update soon please!!! |
Author Feedback: Yeah, that's about as suspenseful as I can get too when it comes to these things. Can't say being subtle and mysterious is my forte.
I'm hoping to have the next chapter written before the end of the week. I go back to university next week, which means less time to write. SO, if all goes well you should see something over the next few days or so.
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Loool dragon ball Z omg.! anyways lol great chapter! loved it!!! hm as much as i like ginny/draco fics... i think this one she had better end up with neville as for cho&krum.. don't think they gave up yet.. but yeah... well hope you can update soon |
Author Feedback: Hehe, you gotta love DBZ.
I only have a few days of break left, so hopefully the next chapter will come out by then. It's back to busy assignments after this week, so I will most definitly be trying to finish this one.
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 17/04/08
Well this is quite interesting. I really like this so far.
I have a quick idea...you could have Cho and Viktor show up to Harry's and Hermione's double date under some glamor potion as their dates and then Ron and somebody else dresses up as somebody else (under a glamor) and then intervene, like try and be the waiter/waitress or something. Then Ron (or whoever) end up getting Cho and Viktor away (by splling something or something) and then Harry and Hermione see each other and convene from there.
Oh, Draco, Luna and hte rest of the group could figure out what tey want to do with Cho and vIKTOR, because they possibely stun them and they need to get rid of them
Hope that helps, I thought of it real quick, I could give it more thought and talk to you on msn.
Good lUCK
MIchelle |
Author Feedback: I like the idea of the waiter/waitress. I'll definitly think about that. Viktor and Cho have to come to the date anyway, but I'll haveto figure out if it will be too confusing and fiddly to have them be glamoured up as Harry and Hermione. |
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love harry and hermione's reactions to their letters, hermione's dismissal of it from her mind in favor of SPEW and Harry's overall reluctance were just funny and i liked the interaction between neville, luna, ron, draco and ginny- though i do hope that neville will find someone nice for himself, i just feel rather sorry for him the way he keeps choking up around girls he likes
luna rocks
definately looking forward to an update |
Author Feedback: I'm actually unsure what will happen with Nev, Draco and Ginny. I have no idea who Ginny will choose myself; I'm really just going with it and seeing what happens. Actually that's all I'm doing for the whole story, lol. I would plan it somewhat normally, but because it's a challenge I just find myself writing and hoping it all comes together in a way that makes sense :blush2:
Glad you like it though, and hopefully I'll have an update soon.
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 15/04/08
haha that was funny, with all of them in the cupboard. and with the sneeze. that was the cream of the crop. i like ron in this, helping out with bringing his two best friends together. and with figuring out who was the one that sneeze and that there was someone else in there. |
Author Feedback: Lol, I couldn't resist the cupboard part. I could just picture them all squashed in there in my head and was actually chuckling to myself as I wrote it 
Glad you like Ron. He always suffers in fanfictions, but I still love him.
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Will Harry and Hermione even go well i guess they will.I laughed at that part about Bertha.  LOL  .Krum is so anoying!Is there a love triangle between Ginny,Drace and Neville.Wonder who Ginny likes...Great story so far,update soon |
Author Feedback: Of course they will go! I would not have much story if they didn't
I couldn't resist throwing in Bertha. Poor Harry, and I agree that Krum is annoying.
There is indeed a love triangle between those three, but to be honest your guess is as good as mind. I'm just going with it and seeing where it goes, ahah.
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Author Feedback: Lol, I can't help but mock her.
Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for reviewing! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 15/04/08
Wow I enjoyed this new chapter veary much.
I just love it.
it's so good.
How will the new Mysterty inc get Harry and Hermione together now.
Scooby Doo joke. Please continue this wonderful & excellent story.
and Please continue your wonderful story called
( My Unreality).
But in til then so long.
Good After noon , Good Night and Good luck.
Tha tha tha tha tha tha tha tha tha that's all folks! |
Author Feedback: Ah, the old Scooby Doo. That sure brings back memories.
Glad you liked the chapter, and I'll be sure to update as soon as I can. I'll try get a chapter for "My Unreality" done asap too.
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