I like this ending. Poor Krum but it's kind of funny. Draco and Cho never thought of that but its a good pair. This was a good story. I loved the title.  |
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This chapter is good. I like this story. I like how everyone is caught up in this scheme. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 30/04/08
Woohoo! You took my idea. Your welcome. I really enjoyed that. I thought it very interesting. You sure are still popping out a lot of stories for being back at school. I am almost done, one more exam (done on Friday) and then I'll be free for like 3 months. I'll start catching up on your other stories then. I did like the ending, very interesting. 
Sad that Draco and Ginny didn't get together, but in this fic, it wouldn't've worked. Heheh..it must've been hard for you to write that  |
Author Feedback: Of course I took your idea! I really liked it, though I know it probably wasn't what you were expecting when you made it.
Nah, those were all written before I was really 'back'. Now that I am expect to see much less. I'm too busy now.
I'm happy for you!! I know you've been busy for a while now, so I think you deserve a break.
Poor Draco and Ginny. I think everyone could tell I wanted them to be together, but Neville was making it difficult. |
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AlanaSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 29/04/08
haha, how utterly hilarious! The ending seemed to be a beatuiful Epilogue sort of thing and the way you wrote the chapter is superbly great. Thank you for all of that hard work. |
Author Feedback: Yeah, I wanted to write a little epilogue of sorts (though not a crapilogue I hope *whistles*)
I'm glad you liked the chapter, even if I have my issues with it myself, and thank you for your reviews! You're quite spoiling me with all of these :blush2: |
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must say that i loved the end of krum lol and well i dont like the idea of draco with cho i would rather see him molking some were alone than wit her but other that that the fic was relaly good  |
Author Feedback: Poor Draco, I'm afraid I couldn't resist putting him with Cho in this one though. I'm evil like that sometimes.
I'm glad you liked the fic though, and thanks for reviewing 
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you actually did the mob idea! that is so awesome! thanks for that and i'm glad that neville got ginny in the end, he's a sweetie
lol about draco and cho being the most beautiful couple, that was a nice touch
very cute story, i'm glad that you took up the challenge |
Author Feedback: Yeah, I didn't end up actually showing it, but I really wanted to put it in.
Poor Nev, it still didn't go how I planned, but ah well.
I wasn't even going to have Draco and Cho, but I was getting freakishly inspired to put them together, as they're both as superficial as each other.
Glad you liked the story anyway, and thanks for all your reviews!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 26/04/08
hahahahahahahahahaha.....love what happened to Krum....Loved the fic. It was really funny and cute...loved the part where Ron, Luna, Neville, Ginny, and Draco chase Krum and Cho past Harry and Hermione\'s table!! |
Author Feedback: I think it was just random, lol. I just couldn't take the story serious in anyway, and I know that was what was taking it in a whole new different direction to what I originally wanted to write.
It was fun though, if a little frustrating at times, but all in all I am satisfied with it. I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway, and thanks for reviewing! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 26/04/08
Well this a real good ending.
SO maybe not the way you wonted I love the story any way it was fun.
I enjoyed it so much.
Harry and Hermione end up together.
Ginny with Nevle that made me smile
But the way I wolud end this story is with a cartoon endng.
Input cartoon sondtrack from Loony Tunes called Merry go round broke it down.
With a Harry Potter twist so here it go's.
Tha tha tha tha tha tha tha tha tha that's all Muggles! ( Folks!)  good night ever body  |
Author Feedback: Well I'm glad you liked it!!
haha, that would have made a nice ending I'm sure.
Thanks for all your lovely reviews! |
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It didn't go the way I thought it was going yo go, but that didn't stop me from enjoying the end. Anytime that there is Harmony, I am happy! Too bad Draco was not a good enough catch for Gin this time! Anyway, it was a worthy wrap-up and I am looking forward to reading more! |
Author Feedback: Haha, it didn't go the way I thought it was going to go either!
See, now if Neville was not supposed to like Ginny in the challenge rules, I would have most definitly put D/G. I couldn't help but feel sorry for the guy though, but I know I didn't do their relationship justice. I'm just too much of a D/G shipper for that.
Anyway, glad you still liked it, and glad you liked the H/Hr. I have to admit I'm not very good at writing H/Hr, and was struggling with them in this fic, but it seemed to have turned out okay. I'm quite glad to see the back of this fic though to be honest. It was making me frustrated, lol.
Thanks for reviewing! Your reviews always brighten my day |
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Yes, but what about Ron and Luna? Surely a couple as exotic and eccentric as they are would have a "Awesome Ending" as well. No? Am I wrong?
Anyways, excellent story! LOVED IT! I love the way you write. Write more |
Author Feedback: Eh, my 'awesome endings' aren't exactly awesome, lol. I think they should be happy they got away with just being a happy couple. That and I didn't really want to go off into tangents (which I like to do).
Glad you liked it though, and thank you! I have to admit this story kind of went off in a whole new direction, and I couldn't quite bring myself to look at it seriously in anyway, which is why it might be a bit weird, but oh well.
Thanks for reviewing! |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 26/04/08
Well, it was a nice end, although the reason why Ginny chose Neville was a bit lame. I mean, just because she feared a real relationship with Draco wouldn't work? Hell, you try and then if it fails, it fails. What's the Gryffindor bravery for, otherwise?
And, I'd have preferred if you had left Draco and Cho single. I mean, poor Draco, stuck with that banshee? |
Author Feedback: Mm, yeah, the story didn't turn out how I had wanted it sadly. Ginny wasn't connecting with Neville, and I didn't want her to end up with Draco (though I think the D/G shipper in me couldn't resist putting more effort into their relationship). As for Draco and Cho, well I I figured they actually would work considering their personalities in this fic. Both are quite superficial.
I hope you liked the Harry/Hermione though (even though I had issues with that myself), and thank you for reviewing!
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Author Feedback: I felt bad for Neville too. It won't be so bad for him though.
Anyway, thank you for reviewing, and I'll try update soon as I can. |
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Author Feedback: haha, yes, Krum is an idiot.
Glad you like it, and thanks for reviewing! |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 23/04/08
Well this was quite interesting. I definitely want to see what is going to go on in the next chapter. Too bad for Neville. Hm..you make me feel bad for him in this story. He's definitely much cooler in the books though! Woot. Lol....poor bumbling Neville. I do have to say the way you portray Draco, I think any girl would fall for him, unless you really knew Neville. |
Author Feedback: Neville is a character I haven't really got grounded, so right now he's just poor, bumbling Neville. I feel sorry for him too though, lol.
Draco.... he's such a conceited guy, but I love him anyway. However, I don't think I can bring myself to let him get the girl this time. I'll have to see.
Anyway, hopefully I'll have the next chapter done soon, and thanks for reviewing!
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 22/04/08
Lol, that was fun. Crazy, but fun! Poor Neville, I felt so sorry for him. |
Author Feedback: Haha, I find it hard to be serious with these kind of fics. Neville will get a special something in the next chapter, don't you worry.
Thanks for reviewing! |
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