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mallorie_cruciotrix
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/04/08
WOW! I liked the scene where Harry made an illusionary copy of himself. Well done! Can't wait for the next chapter!
 

Ravenclaw's heir
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 11/04/08
Oh Ron... he had to ruin everything... and is there something going on between Harry and Ginny? *gags* Anyway, nice chapter, I hope Harry and Hermione become more friendly
 

DTeezie313
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 11/04/08
Good chapter. I cant wait for the next chapter. I cant wait to see how you pair Harry and Hermione.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 11/04/08
Yay!! Fast updates are my favorites! Gosh, this is so good. I can't wait to read more. =)
 

stardust0607
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 11/04/08
good chapter!!! cant wait for the next update!! and dont worry sunday or monday is great its a lot faster than other people...
 

Adri_M
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 11/04/08
Hi, great story. I read two others to this same challenge. They were good as well, but I feel a stronger pull to this. Don't know why. Lol. Looking forward to next chapter.
 

Caroline Delacour
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 10/04/08
It is a promising plot; I hope you have reasons for Hermione being so foolish in the first chapter, as that seemed a little OOC. Otherwise, it seems very interesting, quite a different take on the other stories with this plot. I like the cliffhanger, please don't kill her though. That would ruin thye whole story for me.
 

floomehere!
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 10/04/08
lol, nice timing, Ron.

FYI there have been a lot of answers to the death eater Hermione challenge, but each one is pretty unique in its approach and it doesn't feel like I've already read the same thing in a different fic.

*Awaits update*
 

Minnimione
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 10/04/08
Owww... how did he noticed??? He is soooo sensiteve!!!! Good, I like it!! Keep writting.. I´m crazy to see some romanceeeeeee!!!
 

toxic element
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 10/04/08
i forgot to mention it in my previous review but i love what your author note says about people and their shallow canons. =P ahaha. i found ron's interruption very amusing and so can imagine it actually happening. harry's intrigued with hermione makes me smile .. i look forward to the future interactions between the two. i hope you update soon!! =D sunday/monday sounds good.
 

toxic element
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/04/08
=D i loved the first chapter. i also really enjoy how you wrote harry's character a little cocky and sarcastic might be the right words to describe it. i think its fitting for his personality being he is the chosen one. hehe. hermione's a mystery as of now .. but in any story where her character shows her genius and bold in all her actions i love. i cant wait to read the next chapter but i wanted to review this one first. =D great job.
 

phenomenon45
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 10/04/08
kwl i like da plot of this story nice ur a good writer plz keep writing
 

Rowena
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 10/04/08
Hahaha, I loved the ending of the second chapter, very nice touch, a change from all the intense feelings, which I'd say is well appropriately created. Well done and can't wait for the next chapter!
 

Harry85
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 10/04/08
I'll be waiting next chap anxiously, I want to see how this develops. I think Harry misjudged Hermione's reaction to his way to treat Kreacher.
 

Soch
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 10/04/08
Anther fine chapter.
I'm a little bit surprised that once Harry caught on to a difference in Hermione from other Death Eaters (beyond her looks) that he was so willing to ignore that and think about treating her like other Death Eaters. I mean, I'd imgine that if he can trust Snape so completely, that he might focus on 'saving' Hermione.



Anyway, like I said, a fine chapter. I'm eager for the next.
Thank you again for sharing this with us, and kep up the great work!
 

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