Again, you've outdone yourself. This story is just beautiful! And you can see how eloquent you turned me into, because I can't form proper phrases to give you a proper review.

The love, cherishness, the intimacy of Harry and Hermione are so well captured, that nothing I say will do justice to your gorgeous writing.

I just read you mentioned you are working on a sequel for this story and I can't wait for that. Really.

I've already bought my tickets to all of your stories and you don't want to make me sad, do you, so pelase, don't take so long...

this was so lovely, the perfect company to a lazy summer afternoon, thankyou, keep up the good work =]

Ah I loved that! Enjoyed it a lot! I love how they are with each other... so comfortable and loving... they don't need to have been together for a long time to know that they fit...

Ohh, nice one, that, and I love the way they've grown to be together bit by bit 'til he was smart enough to realize just how special and important she was/is. At least he then had the smarts to ask her fairly promptly for her hand rather than wait months or years. 'Tis a very gentle and very smile-inducing story. Now, the sequel you mentioned could be interesting; given Hermione's mania for perfection (not quite OCD, but you do wonder), I can see where getting her wedding "just right" will be enough to madden the most placid soul and she's a most passionate soul.

that was good i liked it i loved how you ignored DH lol. i think the idea of that would be great i cant wait to see that

I loved the fic, very simple and realistic. I'm a sucker for fluff, but I think you've fleshed out their real characters, imperfections intact.

If this is your first, I can't wait to read what else you'll have to offer in the future. Thank you for posting this

Cool, And i like a lot her outfit... red coat... knee boots...hey It was flffy, beacuse I htink i would laugh madly too!!!

Please oh please please write it soon! The simpleness and the loveliness of this fic has to warm just about anyone's heart. Truly Beautiful. The little things you showed made it worth and all the gorgeous Harmony which I must say you captured absolutely perfectly was done utterly brilliantly

That should be fun the Diary of a Mad Bride!! Hahahah the Bottomless Pit yes Harry it must have been a avery dark time *snicker* You add the touch of humour so perfectly!! You write like a real pro! The way he proposed and everything was so right RIGHT!! It was great I felt like I was watching it like I was them it was amazing!

xoxo
Hana

This is extremely cute. I really liked how it was from Harry's point of view. Lovely job. I cannot wait.

Such a cute story. I can't wait for the sequel. I'm sure it'll be just as adorable!

I love this! It was such a wonderful mix of friendship, everyday love, and a little bit of naughtiness.

Looking forward to the sequel....

Love it! You've done brilliantly with the edits. :
) I'm happy to be called you're beta Lovely beginning story, for a firstie, you're quite good. Which is a lot more than I could say for me when I first started out.

Good for Harry. Once he wakes up it doesn't take him long to set things right!! cute story, looking forward to Hermiones POV. I do LOVE stories that are Harry's POV

the "marry me" was DEFINITLY a shock! o thought he would get a ring first, maybe eh can give her one the day they meet with her parents...great one-shot, i like sexy Harry, jaja if i were Hermione i couldn't concentrate either! i'll be waiting for the sequel!
Malu D.

I really loved this piece. It's fresh and has a very natural, "real" feeling to it. Nice job!