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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 65 | Date : 13/09/09
Woo-hoo! Great chapter! I understand that Draco had to turn out this way but rather than portray him as a cartoon villain you maintained some of his humanity despite the twisted methods he employed to get his way. I can respect that more so than an author bashing him outright because Slytherins are inherently "bad people". Additionally I have to congratulate you on your portrayal of Harry. One minute he's all awkward and typical canon-like and then the next he's this bad-ass Auror who's just really good at his job and without any super powers many feel the need to add to his persona to justify his badness. Also, great job on the red herrings in this story. They kept me guessing right on up to the big reveal. Well done!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 32 | Date : 05/09/09
Dear BB...great job! Everything makes much more sense now! I had a feeling this was going to be the outcome. Good job on the foreshadowing!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 28 | Date : 05/09/09
I was going to wait until I finished to comment but this chapter proved my undoing. I've never been a big H/Hr fan but the way you've spun this tale is way to enchanting not to become a fan. In my opinion none of the characters seem OOC given the directions their lives took after the way. However I will say that some of the names you've come up with for minor characters...Jingle...Dogooder...I'm assuming it was meant for comic relief, which is fine but not necessary for me to enjoy more than I already do. At first I couldn't understand why Ron chose to be so petty and remain behind but after this chapter I can see why he would be so angry at them considering there were several times they could have ended the charade. Well off to the next chapter! I'm very curious to figure out what's going on with Draco and who the mystery woman is although I have an idea. Well done!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 34 | Date : 02/09/09
I must say firstly, that I love this story, I've read it several times and it's one of my all time favorites. However, As an American, I must profess myself offended somewhat at your jab at the US using the A-bomb in WWII. Whether it's your belief or Hermione's belief, as an American I believe using the bomb was justified, but I also realize that plenty of non-Americans disagree. I just dont think it fair to put it in the story. I think the example was ok, but you went a little far saying "killing and maiming hundreds and thousands of civilians because they were not creative enough to come up with a better plan to end a war." I dont see it that way, the US could have ended the war differently, but at a MUCH higher cost.
Author Feedback: My apologies for offending you. It wasn't meant to offend. Her comment wasn't directed against Americans but against the few who decided to build it and use it. It was part of a frustrated rant about how time and time again humans in general have used things originally intended for good for not so good purposes.

War is stupid - sometimes necessary but still stupid. I can imagine how difficult it must have been for those who made that decision to create a weapon of such magnitude and nuke major Japanese cities. I can see how the war would have dragged on longer had that not happened. On the other hand, I can put myself on the other side.

I am not American, I am not Japanese, but in my gut I am sick about the thought of being a civilian close to Hiroshima when that bomb exploded, surviving it somehow and burying my parents, brothers, sisters and children because some power hungry idiot of a leader who happens to rule my country pissed off some nation with a weapon of mass destruction and someone there decided my life and my entire family was expendable for the greater good.

The end does not justify the means - but that's just my opinion and i understand that many believe as you do. I can see your point too. It could have come at a much higher cost for the rest of the world but it couldn't have cost any more for many innocent Japanese and generations of them who will continue to live with the lingering effects of the exposure. I just wish somebody thought of something else to end the war. I'm relieved that nowadays we don't nuke entire cities anymore just because their leaders are arses.

Again - I am sorry that I offended you. It was a comment not directed at Americans per se but at something that just happens to involve Americans. Your passionate review in their defense speaks of pride and patriotism and I commend you for that.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 68 | Date : 02/04/09
WOW!!!
this was an amazing story! I loved all the plot twists with neville and malfoy!
You are a great writer and I look forward to reading your other stories posted up on portkey!
Continue the good work.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 68 | Date : 18/02/09
Wow that was actually really good. I got lost a few times in the middle there, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. Not to brag or anything, but all of your plot twists I saw coming, including 3rd Roy Hunt meeting and Neville/Malfoy.

Superb story, superb plot, superb action. All in all a 10/10.
Author Feedback: Glad you liked it and got the plot twists I should say - and I mean this in a totally complimentary way - you have a twisted mind for guessing all that right!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 68 | Date : 29/01/09
This fic was amazing, absolutely amazing!
I have not enjoyed reading a story as much as I have the PP in a very long time. I know a review this short isn't as fulfilling as longer ones, but I hope it's able to convey how much I admire and appreciate your work.
I'm looking forward your other updates; and by the way, any chance we'll get a sequel or epilogue to find out how the whole GreyWarlock!Harry situation pans out?

Author Feedback: Short, long, I get tremendous satisfaction everytime I read someone enjoyed this very lengthy fic and actually finish it Sometimes its hard writing when one isn't sure that people are actually reading and like one's work and reviews such as yours assure me that the time I spend obsessing about getting to the end of a story is not for nothing.

If I were to continue this (and the thought isn't as laughable anymore compared to when I finished writing chapter 68!) it would probably be a sequel. There's always a chance but not sure if I would still have the inspiration after I finish the Keeper. Will see.
 

Seguljin
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 15/12/08
Hey, i don`t know for sure if the topic i want to refer to is mainly mentioned in this chapter but nontheless:

What do you think of writing a fic dealing mainly with Harry emotional emptyness, i think of harrys problems whith alkohol, depression and so on after failing quidditch and realising that he is in love with Hermione.
And that he doesn`t want a job where someone need to rely on him. (not much responsibility)


So a fic whith similar circumstances (Hermione with Ron, he in love, depression, low carreer, failure)

What do you think?

Best wishes,

Seguljin
Author Feedback: I haven't really thought of starting another fic - I'm not sure if you got to the Chapter about the "Petulant Patient.." yet but that one expounds on Harry's problem with alcohol.

 

Seguljin
Signed | Chapter : 45 | Date : 08/12/08
Why are every names of places, states or cities deleted, if i copy the chapter to an open office document?

For example: The postion Master lives in . Next sentence.

I just printed the whole story (good job by the way) . Do you know something about this phenomenon ?
Author Feedback: I am flattered that you liked the story so much you are downloading it.

Unfortunately I'm an idiot when it comes to computers; I don't know why the places are deleted when you copy.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 68 | Date : 08/09/08
I finally found the time to read your story (it took me 5 days), and all I can say is... WOW. This was so amazing, there are no words worthy enough to describe it!

You had me laughing, crying, biting my lips sore in anticipation, cursing at the twistedness of it all... It was just amazing.

You have this incredible way of describing and creating new characters ( I absolutely loved Andy btw) and especially of describing their emotions and train of thoughts. I could feel for every single character in your story and that was great!

And what's almost better is the way you made Ron and Ginny, I adored them throughout your story, which doesn't happen very often in H/Hr fanfics.

I love it when every single detail from the very beginning gets together at the end and suddenly everything makes sense (it's why I love HP so much) and your story is full of that.

It really makes me angry that you have so 'few' reviews for such a wonderfull story, I hope you do know that it would have been so much more if you had not updated all the chapters so quickly...

Anyway, thanks for this amazing fanfiction and the time and thought you put into it. It was a real pleasure reading it and I'm sooo looking for your other fics as soon as my schedule permits it!
Author Feedback: Five days to read this? I am continually amazed by those of you who are brave enough to read something this amateurish and this long. Thanks for taking the time to read and write this feedback. It's good to know what readers like (and not like) about it - I could use the feedback for future stories.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 50 | Date : 19/08/08
glorious. stupendous. amazing. i can die happy now. i love the imagery you have created in my overactive brain.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 68 | Date : 05/08/08
HI
I just wanted to take the time to write to you about this story. It was simply Amazing!, the characte's and there was alot. I liked Harry and Hermione love. Harry and Andy great team, absolutly loved andy great character. The depth of this story, each chapter bringing in new twists with each character just great. You have such a (creative mind). You are inspiring to read, you keep your readers in the moment,and wanting more and more. this took me 1 week to read even into the wee of the night. thank you again for such a great story, sorry it had to end . HAVE YOU EVER CONSIDERED WRITING A SUSPENCE NOVEL? YOU SHOULD! YOU ARE THAT GOOD. I am also up to date with THE KEEPER! also fantastic. keep writing!
Author Feedback:
thank you for this wonderful review. It warms my heart when readers come back and say what you wrote. This story was very long and you are braver than most to even consider reading it I loved Andy too and glad you did.
Writing is just for fun right now and I really don't think I have the technical skills to pull off writing a real novel - not to say that I won't ever. Thanks again.
 

ThoseIGuardIDoNotLove
Signed | Chapter : 11 | Date : 22/07/08
Tilden Toots!!! I\'m not the only one who goes on JKRs website
Author Feedback: got me there, he was wizard of the month when I was writing TPP - reminds me, I should visit again a try to steal more of her characters
 

cosmopolitan411
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/07/08
oops lol,i forgot to add this to favs and just realized that lol...
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 68 | Date : 06/07/08
Wow! That was an amazing story. What a great twist. I loved it. You definitally have talent. I'm looking forward to your upcoming stories.
 

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