I loved it! Definitely looking forward to more stories from you! Awesome! Harry and Hermione forever!! *squee!*

personaly, i think you would make a fantastic romantic/comedy/erotica writer.

That was excellent!
You write beautiful, sexy, sensual, emotional erotica. Well done.

that was smokin hot. fluffy but smokin hot. i love it. i am actually thinking of trying what hermione did... ahahahahahahaha

That was one of the BEST one shots I've ever read! Everything about it was just...Awesome...wow. Great job! :-)

One word can sum up my reaction after reading this:
WOW!
That had to be one of the best Harry and Hermione one-shots that I have ever read. This is including BOTH Portkey and Fanfiction.net
There was great vivid descriptions, it didn't sound smutty in the least, and I have to say that listening to the thoughts of 'Inner Harry' kept a smile on my face the whole time I was reading.

Wonderful story, thank you for the read!

AWWW> i loved this story. such a cute plot with some fighting at the beggining.! thanks for writing and i hope to hear from you soon!

This was really good! It had a different feel from the first chapter, but it was still just as fun to read!

And I totally agree that The Princess Bride is one of the top 5 movies of all time. Whenever anybody says that they haven\'t seen it, I tell them exactly that.

I reviewed yesterday but forgot to add this to my favorite stories, so came back to again say, fantastic.

go on harry! they moved together =]

you should of made it funny that harry actually did apparate in on work naked once it would of been funny as hell =]

Laugh out loud! poor harry i feel for him! i had a similar situation like that before not that situation exactly but the start and mid were prettty close to it xD too bad i love my gf so much!

What? None of the kids became a Dark Lord/Lady? How unrealistic...

First and foremost I would like to say that I enjoyed your story when I had read it a few weeks ago. It is well written and not too shabby on the smut. Well...actually it was pretty intense on the latter, but that's what portkey enlisted ratings for I guess.

The only thing I would like to comment on is a topic no male member of the Portkey community should have to talk about: 'Harry's Family Jewels.' Being that I'm very secure in my manliness or whatever they call it these days I will spearhead the topic.

-'Harry would graciously admit he had an above average sized penis, over eight inches long and about six inches around'-

Any of the women I have been with or even know for that matter would probably RUN if they saw that coming at them (no pun intended). It may be an error or it could be just an overactive imagination, either way thoght you'd like to know.

Bob

This story was quite entertaining. Lol... not in that sense... I liked it. Great ending as well. Yay, Harry and Hermione came to their senses, and got married, like it should have been in the original story. You truly are a brilliant writer, and I think that you should pursue your goal, I guess you can call it, to be a romance novelist, you have a knack for it. Can't wait to read more of your stories in the future, and, possibly, your future romance novels.

This is a great story. I was totally captivated from the start and following this life story in 2 good length chapters was great. Please, more.