AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 16 | Date : 21/12/08
Great story and I could find nothing to criticize. Looking forward to the rest of the story, hope it comes soon. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 16 | Date : 19/12/08
I don't lie much the way you portray Dumbledore *sighs* And what's with the last part? |
Author Feedback: i'm sorry i've disappointed you, though you've already claimed that you're tired of manipulative dumbledore, this was the only way i could see to make him slightly on the innocent side, sorry
thanks for the review |
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CHEWBACCASigned | Chapter : 16 | Date : 18/12/08
great story i really look forward to seeing how you take it |
Author Feedback: glad you're enjoying it, thanks for the review |
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nice chapter to read on a a cold night.
Wonderful,Excellent,Amzing plot.
I give this story 16  out of 30.
please continue this story.
I am looking forword to the next chapter noon.
But till then have a real good week and weekend and Hoilday.
Looney Warner Mouse" Good moning and good after noon and good night and good luck!"  |
Author Feedback: I barely got half marks? please tell me what i'm doing wrong so i can actually improve!
hope you have a nice Holiday as well and thanks for reviewing |
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HJPSigned | Chapter : 16 | Date : 17/12/08
Why? Why? Why did you stop here? Ah, i love this storie. It's one of my favorites. I like it really. But I hate the time when I'm waiting for the next chapter. Really I hate the time. Please, please, please, please update very very very soon. I can't wait to read the next chap, and the chap after the next chap and so on and so on. So I hope you will update very soon.
HJP
PS.: I think i didn't wrote it so: the chap was really good, i liked it. The whole story is very well written. I enjoy to read the story.
Maybe the chapters are a little bit shot, but that's because I always want that the story goes on and on, so please update soon. PLEASE  |
Author Feedback: I had dabbled with the idea of going furrther but harry would let me, i'm writing the next chapter now and i wish i could promise that it would be out soon but it won't, i have too many other responsibilities, and i'm sorry for the time you'll have to wait but i'll have it out as soon as i can
i am extremely happy that you like my story so much, i honestly never thought that i'd get more than say a dozen reviews from people who were only mildly interested, your review has made my day
hope you continue to like the story as i write |
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gravacorSigned | Chapter : 16 | Date : 17/12/08
At least Harry was able to get a couple of more memories back. I wish Harry would have hexed Lockhart as it was and been done with it. I'm curious about Luna now and what that gleam in her eyes was. |
Author Feedback: thanks for the review, the gleam in luna's eye will be explained soon enough and i'm kind of wishing i had made harry hex lockhart too much what's done is done |
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nice update -- I laughed a little when I read Dumbledore's assumption that a naughty bad dark wizard "got to" Harry and just decided to mess with his memories instead of anything more sinister. Oh Dumbledore.  |
Author Feedback: thanks for the first review of this chapter, i'm glad you liked it and i'm glad that i could make you laugh  |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 15 | Date : 29/10/08
Not bad, I guess it was to be expected that someone possessed by Tom Riddle's diary would find it easy to dismantle the twins' traps... |
Author Feedback: glad you think so and thanks for the comment, it means a great deal that you're following my story |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 14 | Date : 29/10/08
Dumbledore bashing, how fun!  Seriously, that's something I really don't like, but I guess I can get over it... |
Author Feedback: I'm sorry! I don't mean to bash dumbledore, I keep intending to reveal his reasoning for the oblivation but he's being irritatingly reluctant to explain things to everyone just yet
thanks for the review |
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Very Very good. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I'm loving your depiction of the characters. Very realistic. I sort of felt that J.K. Rowling lost touch on her own characters around book 5. She just had them acting in ways that just seemed totally wrong from the first 4 books. You have managed to reclaim what I thought was lost. How can we as fans honestly be expected to believe that two people as close as Harry and Hermione were, A couple who work so well together they seem to be a perfect balance, seemingly separate and date people absolutely the opposite. One a girl who never seemed to grow out of being a fan girl, and another who most of the time is either making the girl cry or getting jealous and abandoning his best friend. Oh my lord! I seem to have rambled. Sorry about that. Thanks for the great story. |
Author Feedback: i love it when reviewers ramble, it's fun and i adore hearing peoples' opinions about just about anything really
i agree that JKR lost touch with her characters, though i think it was more in book 6 than book 5, in book five hermione still pretty much had her brain and ginny was more or less unnoticed as usual and i'm flattered that you think i'm doing so well with the characterization, thank you for that
i'm very glad you're enjoying the story, i hope you continue to do so as i continue to write |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 15 | Date : 01/10/08
very good please continue more often, mina needs to show up more often I think to remind him not to screw up. |
Author Feedback: glad you're enjoying it and very happy that you like mina and want her to pop in more, thanks for the review |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 15 | Date : 29/09/08
Great story, and could find nothing to criticize. Looking forward to the coming chapters. Hope they come soon. |
Author Feedback: glad you're enjoying it and overjoyed that you could find nothing to criticize, i'll update as soon as i can |
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PhaeSigned | Chapter : 15 | Date : 29/09/08
Harry *really* needs to regain his memory. In a hurry. Like posthaste.
I'm thinking that things have been changed just enough to cause trouble in a big way. Moaning Myrtle should have heard something by now, don't you think? Unless there's another way to get into the Chamber.
Then there's the fire ability of Harry's. For some reason, Mina thinks he needs this ability, right? I keep thinking of Aragog as I don't think that fire would affect a basilisk.
Interesting about the mudblood comment, though. Food for thought.
Hope your essay got written! |
Author Feedback: yes he does but this way i have an excuse to make him spend large amounts of time talking to hermione
didn't i just mention that myrtle's been petrified? hmm, i thought i made that clear
one is written and i'm procrasinating and now am going to write the second one
hope you like the story, thanks so much for the great review |
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witowsmpSigned | Chapter : 15 | Date : 28/09/08
I'd say that Dumbledore was the one possessed this time around, and it truly serves him right. No one inflicted more damage on Harry than Dumbledore did, by sticking him with the Dursleys. Voldemort could only dream of tormenting Harry as much as Albus' agents did on Privet Drive. Not only that, but Albus Dumbledore has destroyed Potions learning for Wizarding Britain, greatly reducing the number of people who graduate with a Potions NEWT and are therefore qualified to apply to be Aurors, Healers, and many other professions. Most of the ones who do get that Potions NEWT are Slytherins, and are most likely sympathetic to Voldemort's cause, which Snape preaches to them every night for the seven years they attended Hogwarts. |
Author Feedback: no one has guessed dumbledore before, that's a really interesting idea
hope you liked the chapter and thanks for the review |
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gravacorSigned | Chapter : 15 | Date : 28/09/08
Great update....Apparation within the school, that would be a great benefit to Harry. Amazing, how the little things can affect how things happened. I wonder if you will have Harry prevent Hermione from getting petrified or will it still happen. |
Author Feedback: glad you like it, though harry can't apparate in hogwarts, just the twins
thanks for the review! |
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