usha88Signed | Chapter : 8 | Date : 27/05/08
Well this was even interesting. Nice little invention of a creature you made up. Eating clothes. Very awesome that Harry was trying to follow them..he sure doesn't trust them... |
Author Feedback: i didn't really invent it...it's JK Rowling's, i saw the book she wrote, not Harry potter, but something about magical creatures. i was flipping through it in the bookstore and coincidentally, i saw the page where the plimpies are...it was quite destiny, i think, because at that time i was trying to get ideas for my story  |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 27/05/08
Well clearly Harry was following them and then maybe got sidetracked by looking at where his parents probably lived. I am interested to see Hermione get thrown into the past and see what happens at that. |
Author Feedback:  it'll still be quite long before you get there, but i hope you're enjoying the journey |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 27/05/08
Well I'm glad that I don't have to wait for the next chapter. That's a really bad cliff hanger. Grrrr...
Lovely job at this chapter as well... |
Author Feedback: i guess that's what's good in reading completed stories. i choose to read those that are finished as well so i wouldn't have to deal with cliffhangers, but i love writing them... |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 27/05/08
Oh well this is quite interesting. Lovely job. I woulnd't've expected them to be in there. Love the explanation of the necklace. Great job. |
Author Feedback: thank you, glad to hear it! |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 27/05/08
Well this is interesting. Poor Harry..blinded by his own stupidity to see how much Hermione actually loves him. Great job. I really enjoyed this chapter. Ron probably fell in some hole or something... |
Author Feedback: yeah, he did |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 27/05/08
Well the dialog wasn't horrible. I thought it was pretty good. I don't think I could've written any better now and I'm 20..so you're fine. Great job at this chapter. Lovely job. |
Author Feedback: thanks....i'm quite flattered |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 27/05/08
No No you haven't scared me, you actually have gotten me even more interested. I do like to see that Harry can be hard-headed and interesting. I love to see author's different portrayals of characters. Well, as long as they are within reason. I don't really like a Ditzy!Hermione or an Emo!Harry. |
Author Feedback: glad to hear that...i think |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/05/08
Well I didn't take any offense to that author's note. Well, I cannot wait to read more of this. It will be interesting to see yoru interpretations of both of the boys. I do like where this is going. |
Author Feedback: thanks.... |
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great job! heyi have some new ideas for new stories and they all end up with harry and hermione getting together in everyone:high schoolmusical 1and 2, the parent trap,what a girl wants. those are some of the stories that i think would turn out really great. well any way this story has been really good. i cant wait to read ther est of your stories!keep up the great work on all of them!  |
Author Feedback: thanks! parent trap would be good....but i'll finish first the other two |
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hhr4eva093Unsigned | Chapter : 32 | Date : 26/05/08
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Author Feedback: thanks....for reading in the first place and for reading till the very end |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 32 | Date : 26/05/08
Was it so difficult to get them to be together two chapters ago?  I mean, Hermione is right, she should feel guilty because she left and made him miserable for two years without reason. Bloody hell, he tells you HE broke up with Cho, and tells you he loves you, what else do you need, woman?
Sorry, but I seriously don't like how you wrote the story since Harry told her he loved her to the end, so basically the last two and a half chapters. I feel they added unnecessary drama, and make Hermione look a bit stupid too. You would have been much better having them get together in Moaning Myrtle's bathroom. |
Author Feedback: yeah,i know...i had a different ending for this story, but i got to writing the epilogue that way....a lot of people keep saying it wasn't the right ending...got a confession to make though, i finished this story last year and it's up in Fanfiction.net |
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I hope my last review did not discourage you to write. It was not intended for that. Just wished for a more harmonius ending. Or maybe i was hoping you would consider writing an alternate ending for the story. I do hope that you understand what i meant about the last four chapters not being in line with the story. I saw that you like writing love hate relationships. You did a good with that in your other story but in this one you seemed to have forced it to happen for no real purpose. It may have added a couple of more chapters in the story but the ending would have been the same. |
Author Feedback: nope, you didn't. and i'm not at all offended by what you said. i even admit it myself. I was young back then and i really didn't create a good storyline. I just wanted to write. You know the feeling when you suddenly get struck by inspiration and then everything else doesn't matter as long as you get to do what you wanted to do? that's what i felt back then. before i knew it, i was creating a story that others liked and i really didn't pay attention much to the details. But now that I've become more mature, i have realized that before writing a story, i must have a good plot...and i do thank you for saying that i did not fail in that aspect in my other story.
o yeah, i was not offended. thanks for clearing it up anyway.... |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 32 | Date : 25/05/08
Wow that was a real good ending.
I am enjoying it and I love it.
this was so much fun to read,I could not stop reading.
How do you come up with these wonderful & excellent story.
I hope to read a aother story soon.
But till then.
So long.
Tha tha tha tha tha tha that's all folks!
Kermit the Frog " Well it's time to say good bye but we will see you next time On the Portkey.Org show.
Warldorf " Just when you think this show is terrible some thing wonderful happen"
Statler " How is that?"
Warldorf " It end's !"
" ha ha ha"
Me "Good After noon and good night and good luck".
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Author Feedback: thank you for staying loyal to the story all throughout..i know it's not the best that i have, but still you stuck around. i really appreciate it....thanks for the patience and your trademark Looney Tunes ending... |
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A bit disappointing. The ending was unecessarily complicated. The whole point of Hermione going back to her time was to get together with Harry then when goes back she leaves for three years? She could have avoided Harry better if she stayed in the future. The story would have been better if you did what Harry said in this chapter. Wait a day and explain everything. The last four chapters ruined a good story. |
Author Feedback: don't hold this against me...i was really immature when i wrote this...all i could think about was finishing a story. and the interval between my updates were quite far apart. I wrote this story for two years, so you could imagine how different the writing style was in each chapter. sorry if you think i wasted your time, but hey, if it's any consolation, i did warn you in the beginning of the chapter. |
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AmdornSigned | Chapter : 32 | Date : 25/05/08
Ahhh, and the ride is over. "Le sigh"
Thanks for the story and good luck with your other endeavors. |
Author Feedback: maybe it's i who should thank,right? cause i just write but you give me the inspiration to! |
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