usha88Signed | Chapter : 23 | Date : 27/05/08
Oh well this is sad. I really cannot wait to read the enxt chapter. I am glad that we got to talk for a bit. I am also glad that it isn't going to be a sad ending! |
Author Feedback:  me too....
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 27/05/08
Well..I wonder if she's marrying Ron. Great job at this chapter. Very interesting...I would be extremely surprised. Can she change time?? I mean can she change her future? |
Author Feedback: she can...  and she will... |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 21 | Date : 27/05/08
Well this is interesting. Now I get what happened in the last chapter. Great job. I really can't wait to read what her reaction is when she finds out their ancestry. I hope that convinces her to come back. Also..she only has three more days... |
Author Feedback: woah...you've been counting...i really do love readers who get into the detail, even though others really become so obsessed with pointing out tiny teeny mistakes...but hey, i don't really mind that |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 20 | Date : 27/05/08
Well I'm a bit confused now. Hermione has to want to come back to Harry once she realizes that Harry loves her or soemthing? Hm...I'm still a little confused. Great job. |
Author Feedback:  i can't understand why you keep saying it's a still great job when you're confused, but thanks anyway |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 19 | Date : 27/05/08
Well..then this means that they're her great grandchildren. Well, hm...Hermione would've had to gone in the past for it to pertain for futurama. Oh well...
Interesting about this chapter. I do hope that you talk about the "Malfoy-OPotter" feud. Greatj ob. |
Author Feedback:  i will, in the next chapter, i think |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 18 | Date : 27/05/08
Well that wouldn't be good..taht meaning that Cole would disappear. Very interesting. I really like this chapter. I am glad that you explained things a little bit. Very clever way of putting it in a poem! |
Author Feedback: yeah, i was also writing this at the time of the ingredients inventing thing...you could just imagine how i fared when the test came up about the thing they were discussing during class |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 17 | Date : 27/05/08
Well this is interesting. Lovely job. I really enjoyed this chapter. Great job at this. Interesting to see how Hermione and Cole act...I wonder if he reconigzes that Hermione was technically his grandmother. Oh..that'd be funny if they had sex..hehehe..oh futurama... |
Author Feedback: i know...but since i wrote this when i was only 15, i think, i wouldn't have dared to include sex in it...now, perhaps, but not then...hehehe...so much for innocent |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 16 | Date : 27/05/08
Well this is interesting. I wonder why Cole is so...skeptic/hestitant towards her. Great job at this chapter...I really enjoyed it.. |
Author Feedback: thank you very much |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 15 | Date : 27/05/08
Well, she must be in the future then. Very interesting. And why were those cold brown eyes taht she was staring into...why not "warm" Lol. Lovely job |
Author Feedback: cause i would like something more interesting to happen than nice people meeting her |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 14 | Date : 27/05/08
Well I'm assuming that James was the person who she fell on or something. This is very interesting. I wonder what happened. I am glad that this little tidbit finally happened. And..very intresting that Hermione was in that corridor or something..hm...what s that about? |
Author Feedback:  really, nothing to say that wouldn't spoil the next chapter |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 13 | Date : 27/05/08
Well I'm glad that Harry finally realized how dumb Cho is. I just want to know who was running down the hall and if it was Ron. That little part was confusing. Great job at this chapter... |
Author Feedback: that would be Ron, i think..or Peter Bland |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 12 | Date : 27/05/08
Well this is even more interesting. Maybe it's another Harry from the past or something. Well, I cannot wait to read about Hermione goes into the future or whatever... |
Author Feedback: not really... |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 11 | Date : 27/05/08
Aww...well he finally admits that he loves her. Well..hopefully it's more in the romantic light then just the platonic one. Great job at this chpater. Hermione sure can be a little bit techty..of course..who knows how I would be after that... |
Author Feedback: yeah...glad you understand |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 27/05/08
Well that is a cool concoction that you made..the Aertone or whatever it's called. And I do believe you are returning these reviews to me as I read this. Lol. Well, clearly Harry is going to go and save her..woo |
Author Feedback: yeah, i am...isn't that cool...hehehhe....i was inventing the ingredients when my teachers were discussing literature...hehe..not a very good girl, am i? |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 27/05/08
Well this is really interesting. I do have to say that the conversation between Ron and Harry was a little different then what I would've expected. I would've expected Ron not to tell Harry or something. More of a rise out of Harry, but whatever.
And you wrote this before we were informed that boys can't go into girls' dorms..so I wont' say anything about that... |
Author Feedback: thanks for giving me the slip. |
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