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Just wanted to let you know how fabulous I think this story is and also wanted to add it to my favourites so I can read it again sometime. I JUST loved your Harry, especially the flipflops and beenie combo and the stealing of the lollipops and the stripping down in the kitchen.... it all set my heart a flutter. |
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newynSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/09/08
I keep coming back to this, the coolest present-tense first-person Hermione-POV fluffy short HHr fic to be found in PK. Lyrical in beauty. More power to you. |
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TigerlilyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/07/08
Nice! Like it.
(Thats all I wanted to say but I have to write at least 10 words so here they are  ) |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/06/08
That was really really cute. Great job. I really enjoyed that. I had to read this even though I should be in bed. Lol. Great job at this. |
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it was really neat how you did that. I really like your writing
keep it up
-megz-
p.s. would you be able to make one that's sort of a companion/harry's pov?! |
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Hey I love this story!!! It's so sweet! I just watched "10 Things I hate About You" a few days before reading this!
This is my 3rd or 4th time reading it and i'm still loving it! =D |
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newynSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/04/08
This is great, never mind the backstory. Nothing wrong with Harry. If there\'s anyone OOC, it\'s more likely to be Hermione et al. Keep writing. |
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liamtohaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/03/08
Nice... that was sweet. I love ten things I hate about you and that was a sweet little merging of the poem with dear harmony. Good job!  |
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That was brilliant, dear! I particularly loved how minimal their dialogue is, and how their actions say every little bit about their feelings.
I don't really think Harry's too OOC here. Although there were some parts that made me doubt if it was still Harry you were describing.
Amidst that, the fic is pure brilliance!
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Author Feedback: I think I know what you mean about my Harry....I think he looks a bit different in my head, kinda taller and much better looking than he is in canon  definately doesn't look like Dan Radcliffe in my mind...not that there's anything wrong with Dan  But he always comes out a bit taller, broader and sexier in my stories 
I'm glad you thought that about the OOC too - I think some people missed that the whole end scene was him BEING OOC to prove a point. But I thought I better put that disclaimer in anyway.
thanks for your lovely review  |
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ooh, god. i love that movie. everytime, it kills, especally bc of heath. :[
but this was genious. absolutly loved it. 
*favorite* |
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Nice piece of fluff. I like it and I can see Harry doing that when he is not stressed about Voldemort. Good work! |
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I loved Harry and Hermiones' interaction in #1, when she took the lollipop back, really well written. Not just #1, the whole thing. Great job. |
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awww that was just soo cute
too cute for words really lol |
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I am awestruck at how you connect these events to the poem itself. And I like your modified version better, since the fanfic you created it with is just... well, I actually have no words to define it. You struck me speechless.
It's okay if you made harry a little OOC. I think that was necessary to fit in with the plot, you know, the whole poem thing. Well, your "lighter side of Harry" was cool, though. Given us a breather to the "Dark, brooding Harry" we got accustomed to.
Cheers to this fic! And to you, of course.
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ahhh! (:
i'm just in love with this fic.
harry doesn't seem that ooc,
except for the whole quidditch pitch thing- i'm not too sure i can see him doing that.
but you warned us, so you're legally in the clear.
way to go!
fantastic job. can't wait to see other things from you.
~lil_irish_girl |
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