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I really liked it. But, Dumbeldore's dead isn't he? or you are writing a different plot? |
Author Feedback: Dumbledore was dead, if going by canon, yes. But you'll see in my story information that my story only follows canon up through the fifth book. ; ) Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! |
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Hana-xoxoSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 21/03/08
Holy Moly! Can I Reducto you!!?? Pweez That was a horrible cliffie!!! So Dumbledore is alive YAY yay!!! Why do they want to see her huh huh huh huh??!!!! 
cry: Swee I am cwying!! And- *gasp* *breathe* I'll explain that to you now ok? Don't leave k? K?! *clears throat* You know that amazing euphoria when you read something so mind-blowing your heart is stuck in your throat and beating a million times per minute and you don't know how to describe such brilliance? Yes? Yes I had that feeling times 100000 when I read this  It is so good and argh!! cliffie!!!! Ok sorry *BAD HANA smacks Hana* if I have totally scared you off of me Ok really I am being serious now- REALLY!! *clears throat and proceeds*
Wow! This is an amazing chapter and it makes me want to invade your mind and fish out the next chapter hehe! Don't worry take your time with it...not TOO long though like a month coz then I'll be  sad!! Anyways  The humour was done very skillfully and was portrayed absolutely amazingly! I could not stop laughing about Fred's "activities" it was hilarious and I had a similar reaction as Hermione did! I mean Harry squirm- *pauses to regain sense of speech and breath* shifting in his seat HILARIOUS! You depiceted it amazingly!! BLOODY BRILLIANT I say to quote the Weasley's!! Hahahahahaha! The hung-over household is hilarious! and the "it's not funny line" from Harry? PURE GENIUS I say GENIUS!! haha get it Genius LOL-ING!! Ok ignore that I am a bit wonky today!! Neville!! Hahaha He'd do anything! LOL! Aww Molly that was done so nicely! You can change things and make transitions amazingly well! I loved it! And that was absolutely so so adorable when Harry told her the brilliant witch thing!  So lovely and you captured that moment amazingly!! I am addicted to this story making me want to click a next button!! I love how you have the Auror/Ministry plot I have ALWAYS wanted to see that angle explored so thank you so much for that!! Brilliant plot and I love it loads!!!
Oh and thanks for that speedy update 
xoxo
Hana |
Author Feedback: Wow. Erm... to address all questions and comments, in following order, here goes.
Yes, Dumbledore is alive, and he will stay that way. You'll just have to wait and see what they've got cooking. ; ) I didn't realize that my writing inspired so much joy as to cry over, but I'm glad it touched you.  I'm sorry for the cliffy. And don't pull a Dobby on me, you haven't scared me off. I'm glad you liked the chapter. The latest the next chapter will be is next weekend, but I'm hoping to crank one out before Sunday. Humor is always tricky for me, but I'm glad you thought I did well. Minor correction, it was George's activities, but I thought it added a nice touch and expressed how happy everyone was. Neville... I plan for him to be around a bit; he's usually cast to the side and I feel a bit badly for him. I'm glad you thought the transitions were done well, and thank you for noticing. And yes, I thought Harry telling her she was brilliant was cute as well. The Auror/Ministry plot will certainly be in the next chapter, but I'm not sure about the rest. I haven't gotten that far into discussion with my little plot bunny yet. ; )
Whew. Thanks for the fantastically long review, and feel free to leave more whenever you like! |
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really good chapter. how many chapters have you planned untill harry / hermione get together? |
Author Feedback: Thanks for reviewing. I haven't got the chapters outlined... just a bague picture in my head. It might be a while, though. Not too long, of course - I hate when I read a story and romance doesn't start until thirty chapters in. But don't be expecting it in the next few chapters either. |
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Thanks for the reply;
Tibi - to you (dative form of second person singular ie when talking to one person tu te túi te tibi)
grates ago with dative means give thanks to
sophos! just means well done! or bravo! or equivalent
So I am just saying thank you and well done!
See you after chapter 3 oh and here's another for you:
vivas et floreas diu. FS |
Author Feedback: Is that something like I'll be seeing you for a while? Do you take Latin? You seem to know quite a bit, haha. I'm hopeless. |
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Ok, now chapter 2 is up and you continue to delight me with the aftermath of everyone's drunken hedonism - except of course our favourite couple, who sensibly refrained. Although I'm sure their time will come:-)
You continue to develop the characters and now I have quickly turned the page again with the expectation of mayhem and confusion at the ministry in chapter 3. Mind you at this rate, it looks as though I might have this satisfied over the weekend:-)
Tibi grates ago, et sophos! FS |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you liked it. I'm trying to keep my readers from having to wait until next weekend, but if I can't get another chapter out by Sunday, that might be the case. : (
What exactly does 'tibi grates ago, at sophos' mean? I'm in Latin I and can figure out that furor scribendi translates to furious writing (or some kind of passion for writing, depending on whichever way you want to word it), but my limited Latin knowledge doesn't extend too far, as I'm sure you can tell. ; ) |
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HJPSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 21/03/08
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Author Feedback: Thanks for the enthusiastic review! |
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Hey - this is a great story!!
I'm really enjoying reading it. Please update soon - I wonder what Hermione's news is?
Keep up the good work - now I'm off to read your other story  |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you're enjoying it. : ) I hope you enjoy More Than Anything as well. |
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Oh you wicked woman! what have you got up your sleeve this time? Teasing all of us with a cliffy like this is a major no-no! I'm talking...*Azkaban*-level offense!
SO - get yourself out of trouble & post again soon!
::laughing::
the_scribbler |
Author Feedback: When I wrote it, I wasn't really intending for it to be a cliffy at all, but apparently my readers think differently. Thanks for the review!
I'll probably make another post sometime this weekend (as it's the end of my spring break, sadly) but if I can't get one out by Sunday, it'll probably be next weekend.
Please don't lock me up in Azkaban! I beg of thee! ; ) |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 21/03/08
Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens at the ministry! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. ; ) I hope you'll be pleased with the Ministry dealings. |
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You know the saying "Too much of a good thing, can't cause antoher good thing"?
I now know the exact meaning of that. I just finish reading the first chapter of this story, finish sending you my comment about said chapter and then what do you know! I'm gloriously happy about the next chapter that was just updated. But it couldn't cause a good thing and it just so happens that you gave us readers a cliff hanger. A very big one mind you! 
I soooooooo want to know what McGonagall's eyes were shinning for and I really want to know what's up with Hermione! PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE AGIAN! THANKS SO MUCH!
Another AMASING CHAPTER! Keep up the great work! |
Author Feedback: Well I'm glad you like the second chapter as well. : ) I'm going to try to crank out another chapter before Sunday, but if not I might have to leave you hanging for a while. But I'll try to manage SOMETHING for you. Thanks for the review! |
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*chrissy*Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/03/08
I'm lovin the story so far. It's got a great plot I think. |
Author Feedback: Glad you like the plot. : ) Hope you enjoy the next chapter. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/03/08
This was a really cute beginning. I really like how you ignored the death of Remus and Tonks. It seems better wtih them alive. I can't wait to see what happens next. |
Author Feedback: As I put in the story information... this story is only canon through the first five books. I didn't like the ships nor the deaths in six and seven. ; ) I'm glad you like it so far. Thanks for the review! |
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keep typing. this was an amazing chapter and i can't wait until the next one comes out. Great job and keep up the great work. PLEASE UPDATE AS QUICKLY AS POSSIBLE! Absolutely smashing! |
Author Feedback: I hope the second chapter is just as much to your liking as the first. : ) |
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this is a really good fic and describes how harry would feel after the battle much better than that scribble at the end of the seventh book |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you like it. : ) Thanks for the review! |
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SummerUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/03/08
the part with the pictures, i wanted to cry. wow, i am so pathetic! hehe...really though. great work! i'm anxious for the next chappie! update soon!!! |
Author Feedback: Glad you liked it. : ) Thanks for the review! |
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