that was bloody brilliant! i really enjoyed the story and look forward to reading more of your work.

Aww, very cute. This is why I always loved Harry and Hermione--they could just be themselves when they were together. Their deep understanding of each other and their comfort around each other is just beautiful. So very Pride and Prejudice. Lovely. Harry's embarrassment was very cute. I was wondering how long it was going to take Hermione to respond. But of course it was worth it in the end. I loved the "...other activities" at the end. Completely adorable story!

Loved it.The story was very sweet, loved how nervous he was and how when he said i love you she ripped the page, I can totally picture that if it was cannon, y'know?Loved it

This was simple and cute. Very enjoyable, really.
I like how Hermione was so concentrated on fixing her book. It just seems to fit her character so well.
Well done, as usual. ^^

That was lovely. I love the transitions in the whole story, as well as the small random facts placed in different parts. I also adored how you mirrored Harry and Hermione perfectly with their actions and their attitudes.

Great job!

I really like that story. I was kind of wondering where it was going to lead to, and you did a wonderful job of getting there. Great story. =)

Wow that was excellent! You captured something SO Harmonyesque. Now THAT's love. Not the fighting jealous kind like R/Hr. Now write me a replacement for the DH epilogue! Thanks

Wow, I love it. I nearly cried it was just..beautiful.

That was a really cute story! I enjoyed the slow build up, the way the two came together, really. Thank you so much for that! I really loved it. (Sorry, no flames here!)

oh that was gorgeous I found this thru Recs and they said you're only 15yrs old!! Far out, great writing -for any age! Lovely. Will definately check out more of your stuff.
Love it

*wicked chuckle* I love that they specifically warded against Ginny, and I'm willing to bet there're spells placed to prevent spying visually or through extendable ears on them, too. It's good to see that they've both realized just how strongly they feel for each other and 'twill be interesting to see follow-up stories, or chapters, that show the evolution of their relationship from this point on.

I loved it! Really cute. Loved how Harry just blurted it out and how Hermione was shocked enough to have torn her book.

omg!!! that was soooo cute!!!! she was so nervous, trying to find the tape. *sighs* really sweet. great work! SEQUEL!!!

I loved it...I loved it...I loved it....
man...i wish this was how it went in the dh.
anyway.. ur great.awesome story

Brilliant Story! I love the everything about this story! Can't wait for more from you!