gingercatSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/03/08
Cute one shot. Harry reading Hogwarts: A History!! WOW Hermione is a good influence on him.
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Author Feedback: I've checked them, I'm going to repost this now that I've made the corrections. Thanks for the help. |
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Pretty good. Not my fave of yours, but a good piece nonetheless. A good response to Jayu's challenge.
Maybe it was a bit cliched, but I have to say that the whole idea was a bit commonly used. Good work, all the same.
P.S. plural of 'foot' is 'feet,' not 'foots'  |
Author Feedback: ah, yeah, you're right about that plural. silly of me to make such a mistake, really.
I'm glad you liked it, though. |
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hhrldg15Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/03/08
aww i really like that, it was so cute. I like that reason of Hermione distancing herself from Harry because of Ginny. Much better than the books way of explaining it  . I like your way of using their silent communication to make it seem as though this wasn't a huge step in their relationship. Makes it seem more realistic.
Great job and can't wait for more
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Author Feedback: I'm glad you liked it |
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Orli_LuvaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/03/08
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Author Feedback: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it Jo! |
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that was good i liked it so far i cant wait until the next chater come out |
Author Feedback: It's finished, it's a one shot |
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Yes I agree entirely; we could all do with some fluff instead of the stories expounding the 'delights' of unfulfilled dreams amd teenage angst.
Thank you so much it has made my day: I was feeling a little fed up with myself. Ok so it's vicarious enjoyment - but I don't care!
Ob fabella tibi grates ago, et sophos!
Vivas et floreas diu. FS |
Author Feedback: Well, fluff is always good, but at times angst is not that bad too, if it's not overdone. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/03/08
That was really adorable. And I don't know about anyone else, but I was definitely in need of a little fluff to balance out all the angst I've been inundated with over the last few weeks. Thanks for writing this. |
Author Feedback: Fluff is always good. |
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Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can. |
Author Feedback: Thanks |
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