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moonies_rule
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/03/08
I think we'd all like to end like that in real life, or even in the real Harry Potter world. That was cute, I really enjoyed it.
Author Feedback: Believe me, this time I'd really prefer it to happen in real life than in HP.
 

What contented men desire
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/03/08
Ha-ha! Cuba Libre!

Sorry about that, couldn't help myself.

Well done. Not too long, but not flipping through the pages like mad. In my honest moments, I have to say that the way Mark breaks up with her is a bit of a cliche. Really though, there are so few ways to do it that aren't cliched. All thanks to Hollywood.
Author Feedback: I really like both Cuba Libre and Mojito

Yes, sort of a clichè, but as you said, there's too many clichès about that, it's hard to not fall into one If they had broken up in real life too, then I'd be able to put the real way he did that here, but I'm still in the "friend only" mode here...
 

TogetherForever, H/Hr
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/03/08
Ha yea wouldn't we all.... I know how you feel. This is somewhat is happening to me only i'm the Harry part of the story and it hasn't gotten that far yet.... lol

*%* Susanna *%*
Author Feedback: Tell me about it. I'm in his shoes too, and I just hope it will end this way...
 

Churros are Good
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/03/08
Aw, cute story. I really liked this one, how they never met before, however they're still meant to be, ha. Well, great one shot, so keep up the great work!
Author Feedback: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
 

RupertsGirl112289
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/03/08
Hermione's birthday is in september Ron's is in March just thought I'd point that out but with the six and seventh books being so out of wack I figure people forget oh well cute fic
Author Feedback: I perfectly know. Hermione's birthday is on September 19th. I said in my A/N that I took the liberty to move it some months forward (or backward, depends how you look at it, ) to March.
 

destroyerdrt
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/03/08
Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.
Author Feedback: Thanks
 

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