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Mabel
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/03/08
Don't I know how you feel...

To take a quote from my favorite musical:

"Everyone has their story. It's written down centuries before..."

Some stories don't have a happy ending. I believe this one does. So good luck for you and me and all these thousands of people out there, who know exactly how it feels to look somebody from the distance and not be able to hold them or be in their arms.

Coming back to the this story, it's as good as your others, if not better. The ones that come from the heart are always the best.

Maby
Author Feedback: Thanks for wishing me luck, and good luck to you too!

May time make both of us happy with the ones we now look from the distance

And I'm glad you liked the story.
 

Cateagle
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/03/08
That is a nice one-shot and I admit that I do like the way it ended. I'd hope, for you, that you're at the point of aiding and comforting the jilted party, as there's hope there, rather than staying the best friend you can and hoping for the best (there's still hope there, but it's nowhere near as great). I thought it was a nice twist to have them attend different schools and then meet up in Auror training. I daresay that's going to be an interesting group of couples in the future, though it'll be interesting to see who Tricia develops a firm relationship with.

Bravo!! for an enjoyable read.
Author Feedback: Actually no, I'm still at the point of waiting for them to break-up. Thanks for the review.
 

Hana-xoxo
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/03/08
Aww that was a lovely story! And a very very enjoyable read! Absolutely adored it! I sincerely hope that everything turns out well for you and you are truly happy with it Much Much luck to you

You caught the emotions really well and I absolutely it. So sweet and really feel-good.You need these lovely stories at times. Your writing is brilliant and you caught this amazingly with gradual process, great building up for a lovely finish! And I cracked up with the firewhiskey hehe!! Lovely story I adored it very very very well done!!

Hope everyhting turns out well! :thumbup"

xoxo
Hana
Author Feedback: Thanks for wishing me luck And thanks for the compliments on the fic.
 

the_scribbler
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/03/08
Nice!! That's the way....sweet, romantic...simple. I liked it. THANK YOU You have a very deft touch when it comes to HHr romance & you should be proud of it.

Congrats.

the_scribbler
Author Feedback: Thanks for the kind words
 

usha88
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/03/08
Lol...if only that would happen. Well, I thought that was an interesting story and very cute. I really liked that Mark didn't cheat on her or anything and let her go real gentle. Nice job.
Author Feedback: Thanks
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/03/08
man that was pretty close to what happened to me. it really does suck that they have someone already and you want them. really bad especially if you've been spending alot of time with them. love it.
Author Feedback: I'm glad you liked it. I hope it all worked out well for you, as well as I hope it will for me.
 

canadianmegz
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/03/08
aww that's a sweet story, i'm happy for you. heh i wish you the best of luck
you're a good author, keep it up,
-megz-
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Orli_Luva
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/03/08
Well first off i'd like to say Good Luck and i hope everything works out the way you want it to.

Was a really cute story and it was really realistic i've seen/been in situations like that (not always turning out the right way for me)

Great stuff!

love Jo x x x
Author Feedback: Thank for your support Jo! I'm glad you enjoyed it
 

Angelfire-08
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/03/08
This was really nice; really sweet. In fact, I'm pretty sure I have a nice little cavity developing from it. Harry, ever-so persistent, was written very-well as the type of guy that wouldn't pinch another man's girl. Good for you. And I hope everything does work out for you you as you hope it does. I like the fact you wrote this from something so personal. My fave story of yours to date. BTW, keep your head up, things get worse before they get better. Good idea. Great story.
Author Feedback: Thanks for the support, and yes, I won't give up. I just felt like I had to get it out of my system somehow, and so here it is this one-shot

 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/03/08
I love Short story's this one realy good to read.
I en-joyed it so much.
It's was cute and sweet.
But one part was "Hot" o baby.
Yikes too hot hot hot.
How you feeling.
Hot hot hot.
Sorry I got the song stuck in my head now what's next?
Oops here comes the next song form Alvin and the Chipmunks called " Bad Day" and with that "Witch Doctor".
I better get out of here soon before some thing else happens.
Tha tha tha that's all folks!
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review
 

kimmypotter
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/03/08
awe that was so cute! i cant wait to read the rest of yourstories!keep up the great work!
Author Feedback: Thanks
 

jediyoda
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/03/08
first off, that was great for an AU potter fic. Greatly written and a good idea for fanfic. Is there an epilogue for this?

Second, I wish you luck on your quest for your lovely girl. I know that you are hoping for a happy ending with her, thus i wish you luck on that. Just dont give up hope and just always be there for her. Who knows when will fate knock on your door?
Author Feedback: No, there's no epilogue, sorry

I will follow your suggestion, thanks, and let's hope for the better
 

travis_love_03
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/03/08
that was good at first i didnt know why it was up here but then i realized and loved it. You had me wanting them to get together. I loved it i was happy and sad it was freaking awsome. great job
Author Feedback: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it so much.
 

hhrldg15
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/03/08
I love it. Its such a cute one shot. I agree, we all would love a happy ending but sometimes it takes a while to get there . I hope you get your harmony happy ending as well .Good luck!! .
I can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve for your next story

Great story, excited for more
Author Feedback: Thanks for wishing me good luck. Let's hope for the better
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/03/08
love this story! hope everything works well for you! wishing you luck!
Author Feedback: Thanks, I sure enough hope it all works well for me too! Seriously though, thanks for wishing me luck.
 

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