I liked Hermione's perspective about Harry's love for her.
Keep with the good work, and until next chapter!

Nice chap, I really liked it. Keep posting soon, ok? Please!

so cute!!
i love it, i don't know what to say, it's so nice!!
really i have no words to express how wonderful you are taking their relationship.
how they have flaws like everybody, how they support each other... wonderfull.

great job

OMG... I'm loving this fic... it's really realistic, but it's sweet just the same. and funny too
please post another chapter soon ;D

Hasta o/

oooh, a new chapter tonight?! yes please! this is quite a brill fic! :]

Archie - I like what you've done...even if it's not connected by any particular thought. I understand that you've made an effort to portray a more realistic love by using adjectives to get at certain ideas - but I do think that those of use who are writing particularly long stories don't necessarily have it wrong, either. It's simply stylistic

Anyway - I applaud you for what you've done and how you've added to HHr fanfiction.

Regards,

the_scribbler

This was cute as can be. It felt a bit more real too. Just a thing, and maybe because I'm a girl, but according to this, I'm a a lot more like a guy than anything else. People are people, what they do and how they do it is not my concern. Meh, maybe it came from hanging out with guys when I was little. *shrug*

Nice job on this!

Wonderful chapter Archie

I found this chapter extreamly real, especially when it comes to teenage love. Hell, I'm going through what this chapter defines at the moment.

Cannot wait for more

lol, I agree with Hermione, my foot never popped when I got my first kiss. In fact, it never did pop

that was really cute, however, I honestly think that bliss is more than amazing

No offense, but I can't read this... ha. I'm not saying it's bad, I'm just saying I know you, and I know what its purpose is... (Sam) so yea... now it's like hearing you gush about him and I can't take it 'cause it's like my sister saying shit about her b/f. So yea, SORRY, but if I knew you less... a lot less, ha ha ha. It's good though, just... I can't do it. HATE ME IF YOU WANT... but I just can't stop cracking up at this. LMAO

you rock my face Brookers

Can I just say... SOMEONE GOT LAID!! Ha ha ha. Come on Brooke, we know you sexed him up... hahaha! Oh, this is too good. Ha, man I'm a bitch, I'll really read this now...

again, this chapter is realistic and true to life...good job on this story...

girls are very serious about 'girl's day'...very true...this whole chapter is really realistic!

aww so cute! this, again, is really realistic for them! I love it! awesome job!