Hermione is a bit overworrying here, don't you think? But I liked the end of the chap

Poor Hermione! She is so insecure. When I was fourteen, I was the nerd's nerd. Of course, the word was different then but the meaning was clear. Boys had all the same fears and they were compounded by the obvious fact that girls banded together and showed a united front and besides they were miles more sophisticated than we were and they had us pegged as to our motivations. The time was the late phases of WWII and we also had to live under the cloud that most of us would be drafted and sent to the next Omaha Beach or invasion of the Japanese mainland, never to know the sensations of love (especially "Love"). Fortunately, the war ended for us and I went to live in Germany with my Dad, an occupying officer.
I like the gritty logic she uses in making her points - I guess I just like your writing.
More, please... Old Chuck

wait a second ! archi .... are you the author of " the potter vs. granger rivalry"? because i have a question about how that story is coming along.... any news about an update any time soon?..... waiting for the mind blowing story to be updated...its hard to find really well written stories and that one is on my top ten list.... okay this story was cute and sweet... like dessert..

Well I just read all the chapters, And you are quite accurate about love. very, very, good . "There are a couple of saying's that stood out that you wrote, that I think sum up a life partner"

1. I love the way He/She love's & accepts everything about me. Every flaw & fault, even every "annoying" quality is absolute perfection in His/Her eye's.

2.You look good enough without trying to look good.

3. It changed both of us and made us better people.

4. He /She is KIND, CHARMING, and makes you laugh, showes he/she care's, and dosen't try to change you.

5. The word's "AMAZING", "FANTASTIC", "BLISSFUL", "BOUNDARIES", "MORALS", "LISTENING", "SECURITY", and if you dont mind me saying really good "sex". Make for a happy, and loving marraige. I kind of have 18 years of exsperience, and still happy.



p.s. CHEATING AND HITING, ARE THE TWO WORST THINGS TO DO TO YOUR PARTNER.

This was an absolutely beautifully written chapter. It kind of explained my feelings on soul-mates, which means you did a really nice job writing this.

Very well done. Like I'm pretty sure I have said before, you have portrayed Hermione's feelings, and her relationship, platonic or not, (well, not platonic), very well.

You are a wonderful, creative writer, and I love this so far.

:L)

I have two things to say. First is that I like this story very much. It is very interesting. Second is that if im not botherig anyone I would like you to ask your friend if she can finish the story A Year of Secrets, Lies, and Betrayal. I was reading it the other day and I just couln't stop!! Anyway, update soon!!

this was an absolutely wonderful chapter.
i absolutely love how you make Hermione think about all of these things, and how she feels like she shouldn't be thinking of what it's like to break up with him.

brilliant

Good job. I hope harry and hermione do'nt break up, that would be sad. I love them together. you really do a fantastic job.

Really nice chapter, I truly enjoyed it, you know. I hope you can post again soon.

ja , it gets better and better every single chapter , Love this one , keep writing ,and maybe update soon .


julisteamer

Good story. This style of story is very intersting you can see what goews thorugh her head. I would love to see Harry's thoughts too.

Good stuff keep it up.

good start......the words are very good to hear when i'm reading it in my head. so much exhilaration and feeling.

as usaul that was great i liked it its cool to know how he feels about her and i can relate to that its awsome

Its nice to about them acting like teenagers. This story is very adorable and I like it easily.
This chapter is very informative.