Some stuff cleared up . So Hermione's the leader of some crime group sort of thing? It's kind of a forbidden love sort of thing, right? Head of the Aurors married to a clan leader = not good.

Next chapter...

So, just starting this fic. I haven't read the other two chapters currently posted, but I'm really confused about the setting of the story. What time period? What universe? Lily Potter is alive? Hermione is magical? I guess these will probably get answered soon enough, and I'll be able to read the story for what it is, but as of now I'm pretty much just confused. But I can tell your writing is great and the plot seems like it has lots of potential, so this isn't a flame. It's just a "huh, kinda confused right now and don't have much to say, but just wanted to let you know it's confusing in case you want to fix it for future readers".

great job! i cant wait to read the rest of this story!keepupthe excellent work on it!

Words from your A/N 'for now. The story is a work in progress and most of what is criticized will be changed in the coming chapters'...

Your words don't make any sense to me, how can you change the character of Hermione so much that she has become phsycotic killer plunging a dagger in to some one and then twisting it and enjoying it. And that even after you saying that things will be changed, a phsycotic killer can not be changed they can only be removed.

Sorry but you should understand that Hermione is just about the only one of the Potter characters that would not go against her principles. She may kill death eaters but that would only be in a fight.

I agree with the majority of the reviewers this story is not about Harry and or Hermione, you are as one reviewer pointed out just using the names.

If you have never read the Potter books (which going from your portrayal of Hermione you never have) I feel sure that some one would be able to point out where you can get them from, I suggest you read them.

While I do not agree with Hermione's behavior I feel like there is more to the story. From what I've read so far I'm getting the feeling that Hermione is trapped so to speak in Ambrosia. That there is far more that concerning her that you have yet to reveal to us. So, I'm going to continue reading because I am quite curious.

Well...I hope your explanation will clarify everything because right now Hermione is not just OOC, she is completely another person, with only the same name. I also hope you'll explain better about Ambrosia too.

great job!i cant wait to read the rest of this story! keep up the great work on it! its really good and i cant wait to read the rest of it!

Very good! I'm really digging this story, it's a cool fresh idea and I like it! Hope you update soon!

An unlikable Hermione. Way too little information about Ambrosia is, or what it seeks to achieve. The only thing that has kept me reading is that your writing skills seem very solid, and there is the possibility of a payoff. But be careful that you don't make Hermione so reprehensible that no one cares *what* happens to her.

Hermione in this is nothing but a terriorist and a physchopath. the things she is doing their is no way one would be able to get off on. she would have to pay for what she has done e

You totally should update soon pretty please with a cherry on top!

I really don't like this Hermione of yours, you know. Can you please make her more similar to the Hermione we all know? Otherwise, they are only two characters with the same names but not the same persons at all. And I know the story is AU but still...

I'll admit I'm confused but something about this is reallly interesting and totally captivating. It's sucking me in. I'm sorry for some of the flames because even if it is confusing it's good and I think you're going to explain everything in due time. Ignore flames but not the constructive critiscm.

Maybe if you would tell us that you ARE going to explain the situation and everything and this is how you want it to be...dunno but I for one quite like the story it's totally interesting.

And the plot is extremely alluring I want to see some more interaction between Harry and Hermione lOl!

xoxo
Hana

Great story! I really really really really hope you update ASAP!

A pretty good chapter. I am just wondering, why Harry isn't doing anything about Hermione. He knows she had something to do with the death. Also why Lily would want her son to reconcile with a murderer.