Ginny's role is not completely clear to me, I hope it will be clearer later on...

Well, I really don't understand Hermione in this story. Especially, I don't understand what she wants from Harry.

i loved it! i cant wait to read the rest of it! it is one of my favorite stories! keep up the excellent work on it!

Sometimes, the greatest distance lies between two hearts.

On a less poetic note, what is this thing that Ron and Hermione are referring to? "... when Ginny..."?

i really like this story even if it's so au i find it really interesting, please keep up and try to update sooner, it would be great

Christina

great job! i cant wait to read the rest of this story! keep up the excellent work on it! its a really good story so far!i absolutley love it!

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wow, he kicked her out?? and here i was thinking after he'd dissolved the stone, he'd ask her to talk or something.

great job! i cant wait to read the rest of it! keep up the excellent work on it!

Well, I think maybe kicking her out wa sa bit extreme, but Harry's right. Hermione should tell him what's going on, she should trust him. Until she does, she can't expect him to trust her either.

ello! just started reading this story of yours, and im quite captivated by it. i was a bit confused at the beginning, the tension between harry and hermione, the story of hermione's past and the ambrosia thing. but i get it now. plzz update soon!

Great story. There was a big change in character but that was what made it exciting. please update!

This fic is so confusing. I am just not sure what is going on. One minute Harry doesn't like Hermione then he's protecting her even though she has killed people. It doesn't make any sense.

Mmh, so is Hermione starting to understand the uselessness of continuing with Ambrosia? I'd like to see a bit more background on why she felt the need to continue it in the first place.

Some thoughts I wrote down while reading the chapter...

- Exactly how did Hermione just waltz into Harry's office? Presumably at the Ministry? Isn't she wanted or something?
- Who is Katherine Ambrosia (why did harry say "isn't that" and Hermione reply "one and the same")? I'm assuming you'll clarify this in future chapters?
- Maybe explain more about the Ambrosia clan and its relation to the Ministry? And also clarify all the main characters' jobs. I thought you once wrote that Harry was Head Auror but then you said that his Mom was his boss or something, and Ron works with him and Ginny does who knows what. Just minor details like that that may seem obvious to the writer but to the reader it's kind of "huh?"

This story is getting a lot better, though