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Mad, not Ill

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cosmopolitan411

Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/03/08

so i'm a big fan of yours (ADORE the most terrible poverty) which ois wny i guess i'm so surprised by the fact that i didnt really like this fic

i mena it was a gerat premise (pretty original given the way that u spun a cliche and made it entirely your own) but it's just that ti was all horribley rushed and in the end it left you with no real emotional connection to it. felt rather lackluster really...

idk... maybe i only feel that way b/c ur work usually leaves me so speechless, but, nonetheless, i would recommend goign back and redoing this as it has so much portential

p.s. the twist at the end... i think what made it so amazign was just how unexpected it was- but the grave stones... they were pretty sappy lol

Author Feedback: I'm not really sure what to say to that, other than that angst is my Achille's heel.

I'm not altogether sure if I really want to redo it, but I will agree with you on one point: the gravestones were really sappy.

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SummrMagic

Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/03/08

I kinda liked the end... a little throw-back to the Shawshank Redemption. Are you planning on adding another chapter about 'Erik and Beatrice' or will that be it and we can just guess for ourselves what will happen? I also like the way Ginny was not given a knut from Harry's fortune. silly little girl... great story!

Author Feedback: Ha-ha! *triumphant dancing* Someone got it! I wasn't sure if anyone would pick up on it, but maybe I underestimated the power of Stephen King.

No, I'm not planning another chapter. That doesn't mean I won't make one, if the muse strikes me, but I think it works better with the enigmatic ending

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