Well I checked your profile and found this; how I missed its first posting remains one of nature's mysteries. However now having found and read it, its time for my reaction.

After Hermione's apparent schizophrenia during book 6 & 7 - hey how else does one describe it - I'm pleased to see that you at least have refound the real Hermione. Harry is his usual self-sacrificing self and needed Hermione to kick him up the ... well you know where.

Wonderful characterisation and even in a story as short as this the message gets across. I liked the second chapter with Harry's daughter - how true and what a wonderful little girl. Harry makes a great father.

Tibi grates ago, et sophos! FS ( hey latin name, latin salutation):-)

this was quite nice - good of you to ignore that insanity that was the official epilogue.

I am glad that your Hermione recovered from the lobotomy inflicted on her in canon 6.

thanks

That was a nice little chapter/wrapper upper at the end. Wonderful job. I really enjoyed it.

That was really cute. I really enjoyed it. Poor Harry and being sorta daft. Lol. That was great.

I enjoyed both chapters of your story. Lynessa was too cute - I am a pushover for Daddy Harry. I also think that you hit on a good point about the ramifications of Harry valuing the lives of others over his own. Of course he'd need Hermione to explain it to him. Of course!

What a sweet story! I loved the first chapter where Hermione blasts away at Harry about him valuing his life and then admits she loves him. The hoarseness in his voice as he admits is back is the perfect touch of sincerity. This chapter was an added bonus showing us a bit of "married Potters" with kids. I hope you continue to write more stories!

Wonderful story. Really liked the Harry and Hermione characterizations and thier interaction. Thanks for sharing.

WOWW that was Hot and so cute! it made my heart flutter...great job

I like it but it was way too short for me. I so wanted more details on their relationship.

So sweet! Loved it.. sometimes you just need these sweet and short one-shot (or two-shot in this case) and everything is better.. See ya!

Awwww... he has his favorite girl and his favorite woman. I really don't think that life could be any sweeter than that. Beautiful little story.

LOL - I really loved the way that Hermione just yelled her feelings at Harry. That was priceless. Awesome job.

A one shot that is 2 chapters long with a '2 B continued' arrow at the bottom???????? Please un-confuse me.
I like it as far as it has gone ... I just need to know whether to file it in the done list or the 2 B continued list?
Thanks
Barmy

Nice. Is it completed? Anyway, I was thinking maybe you could down the rating to R. It doesn't completely qualify for the nc17 rating, in my opinion. However, it was very well written, and sweet.