I Loved this story. it had a lot of heart in it. that all I am going to.

Well, even the densest comes to their senses eventually. In His case, it clearly took a "clue by four" upside the head, but he eventually did come to realize just what he had with her and what he stood to lose. I rather suspect he's more than a bit ashamed of taking "easy rather than right" and likely more than a bit thankful that she was willing to call him on it. Of course, in the aftermath of thise it could be "entertaining" to see & hear Ginny's reaction when they marry.

Interesting. I would have to tell you honestly, I would've loved HP even more if JKR sculpted Harry and Hermione into this. It's OOC Hhr for the better! XD

Seriously though. I love the whole thing. Every bit. From the inward feelings, to the insistent attitude of Harry. Everything seems to fit. (Somehow, Harry and Hermione here remind me of Mr. and Mrs. Smith xD)

Lovely, Darling. Good work.

Nice story. I really like the ending where Hermione said as if she really need his permissin to hex him.

Great work. i am now officially i fan of yours. brilliant storyline adn you wrote it extremely well. well done.

Well he lost Hermione but at least he was smart enough to realize it and take the first steps to fix it. I don't think Hermione is in love with him yet because she herself said she fell out of love with him long ago. However, it seems the old Harry is finding his way back and I imagine he will capture her heart once again.

funny

it was a bit hard to understand and a bit weird of a story...i hated that harry was so STUPID and i hate it that hermione's love for him was being ignored!! that's what makes me hate men sometimes..im sorry..it's just that men most of the time are so insensitive and so apathetic!! they are just oh so disgusting!! i hate men sometimes but sometimes it's what makes men men...but will it hurt to just be a little sensitive and wise sometimes???


anyway..that story made the feminist me come out..and i liked it

congrats on a great story...

had fun,
mow09

Heya! Yay you've tries your hand at another H/Hr fic! Hun, you seriously have T-A-L-E-N-T!! With the capitals! You mad me cry with this story (in a good way )It broke my heart wrenched it out squeezed it, injected it then put it back into my chest and rewarded with the loveliest most poigant ending! This was amazingly original and it reminded me of the HBP fiasco... now hear me out instead of totally disregarding this one you know I am a great fan! Ok it reminded me of the easy choice and the right choice speech. This was so heart-felt and so touching I am still in that blissful reading zone! If this would have been a real book I would have bought it in a heartbeat! It's so poigant and so beautiful and so heart-wrenching and SO REAl! I love it how you showed them because it makes it so human to just fall into that and not worry and made them amazing! I loved the speech it was amazing! I was bawling my eyes out nevertheless! I love it how you made Hermione doubt him and snap but Harry still went on! It was so amazing by far one of the BEST post-DH fics I have read I would have said that it was a bit rushed BUT then I was reminded of the firewhiskey scene which I adored by the way and I thought that was a great start! I can see into the horizon! This was the first part to acceptance and the forgiveness! You have truly inspired me with this story!

xoxo
Hana

the italics hurt my eyes but that was cute story

Nice dramatic one-shot. I enjoyed reading it - especially when she called him a narcissitic pillock - I'm going to have to use that line on this guy I know!

Nice one shot. I have some difficulty in believeing Harry would ever let his name and fame get to his head. Of course, if that ever happened, Hermione would be the only one to call him on it, that's obvious, still I don't think it would ever happen.

Excuse me, has HE told HER HE loves HER? I didn't see anywhere.

Interesting, first story that seemed plausible, the ending line was terrific, however, what\'s with all the emotional bantering, shouldn\'t Harry and Hermione be on the same level? Good story still.

You know, I expected to not like this fic. When I read the summary, I was thinking, "Whatever! Harry would NEVER act like that. Here we go with another story with underdeveloped characters...maybe it's really about Ron...". But despite that, I decided to read it. (I learned long ago to never judge a story by its summary or what I THINK its going to be about) And I absolutely loved the story!!! I couldn't be more pleased that I read it. The way your portrayed and handled the characters was sheer brilliance. Because now that I've read it, I CAN see how Harry would do something like take the easy way out just once and then get sucked into that life. And I think that Hermione would react EXACTLY like she did. The human-ness of both the characters and the story really grabbed me. Their flaws made them perfect.
I think that, with a tad more build-up and closure, this would have been a fantastic epilogue to the 7th book. So great job! I'm sure you'll catch some flack from people about the OOC-ness... but I think that's my favorite thing about the story (just don't listen to anyone who doesn't think like me ;-) ) Thanks for the surprisingly great story. I hope to read more H/HR stuff from you in the future. (I also really like Rose-Colored Glasses) You rock!

I think that this would be a good one to have angst tagged on to it also. Unique style of writing not sure i liked it to much but over all good story line