Again great job .
I love your stories that's the only thing I can say, please write more of your stuff I really enjoy them

that was a good story well written I dontknow someone would complain about it.

ok now, I have read only two of your stories, Table for Two and Shining Stars. I don't see how anyone can say you suck as a writer.. ok maybe, you sucked me in to an interesting story, and I want to read more. is that suck? well then, suck on, dear writer, because I see something good here, and I intend to follow it.

writing about emotions and relationships is muy hard to do. Internal dialogue and thoughts are not too easy either.

put up your flame shields and write on. Write for your own satisfaction, and that of those who appreciate your output.

Although post-epilogue fics aren't my favorite, I still read them. Sometimes I read ones that I absolutely can't stand, and sometimes I read some that are nicely done. I think yours was done very tastefully. I kind of like that you didn't really go into too much depth, but you gave the reader enough information to kind of have an outline, and then left it up to them to fill in the blanks. I also liked how you kind of left it open for the reader to draw their own conclusions about Harry and Hermione. Most of the times I don't like it when the author does that, but I really liked the way you did. And for the record, I don't think you suck!

I enjoy your stories, so Please don't leave. Please continue this one also!!

I just hope it doesn't take them forever to find out they love each other....like it usually does!!

Good Start!

omg!...well i read this story because i accidentally clicked the link..im so greatful that happened!! what a great story! amazing even! i can't wait to read the rest of it...the best part is...in this story..they are divorced!! hooray!!

AMAZING STORY! one of the best i've read!! and it's only the first chapter!!

uhm...may i just ask, how many chapters will there be? and...how did you come up with it??

amazing really!

amazed,
mow09

That was absolutely lovely! Anyone who think you suck as a writer has LOOOST! Please ignore any and all flamers you don't deserve that AT ALL! Is this just a one-shot?? It has amazing potential to be more than this but if you decide to keep it a one-shot I respect your decision! I loved the characterizations they were utterly wonderful and the emotions were portrayed very well I could feel that empty sense but not sadness and that unfamilliarity as if I was the characters themselves and I could feel the relationship between them that overwhelming thing and the freedom! A very VERY well done chappie or fic heehee!!! Ignore all flames YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

xoxo
Hana

Well, I hope it's not the end. I like the way you portrait those two so I hope to read more ...

I like how you started this story. I like stories based after the Epilogue that fix the relationships to the way they should have been. So after I haven't read a story like yours, so please update soon! I can't wait to see what these you write!

Beautiful little insight to what could be. highly enjoyed it and almost wonder what else could happen but that is really what POrtkey is about isn't it. What could be and what the author can convince of what could happen.

This one-shot was perfect - a happy ending w/o making Ron or Ginny seem like mean, stupid people!

I think that you are an amazing author; your stories are simply brilliant.

Please don\'t delete your stories!

Anyone who says that you suck as a writer should be pushed down a flight of stairs.

An Appreciative Fan

A quiet and gentle story with lots of powerful backstory just lightly hinted at. This story works well as a one-shot, the first in a series of stories showing the evolution of their relationship from this, or as the first chapter of a multi-chapter fic that follows their relationship from post-divorce to where-ever. You've got a subdued tone here that works well with the subject matter.

That was how Deadly Hallows should have ended lol

great job

You do not suck at all! You are a wonderful author! I love your stories! Don't ever doubt yourself you are an amazing author!

I don't think you suck as a writer at all. I read all of your stories today and quite enjoyed them. Carry on!