shadowmanSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 09/04/08
Great chapter, thanks for the quick update. I didn't expect it to come so quick and be so great. Your description of the courtyard was amazing, as i could see the picture in my mind. Keep up the great work. |
Author Feedback: It really just depends on my mood and inspiration. I just work on fanfics for as long as the inspiration lasts and then switch to something else for a while once it runs out. I'm not sure when I'll next update this one, but I may try to get another chapter done in the next week or so. It really just depends.
I'm glad you liked the chapter, and more especially my description. It's always nice to hear that people can really see what I am trying to describe, and since I am trying to work on getting my descriptions better, that's a help to hear you like them.
Thanks for reviewing, and hopefully you'll be seeing another chapter from this fic soon  |
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shadowmanSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 07/04/08
Excellent story so far, I like how you made harry completely aware of his old relationship with Hermione. I hope you find inspiration for this story soon. Please update soon. |
Author Feedback: Glad you're enjoying it.
I didn't want Harry to just be in an alternative world. I wanted him to still be our Harry, the one we know with all his memories and feelings.
I'm actually working on the next chapter right now, so hopefully it will be updated soon.
Thanks for reviewing! |
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SakamoriSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 04/04/08
This is good. Definitely want more.. please update soon. Really want to know what will happen next. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
Author Feedback: This one has kind of been put on hold for now while I finish some of my D/G fics, but I will get back into this one as soon as I can, or if inspiration gives me some motivation to get into it straight away.
I'm glad you like it though, and thank you so much for reviewing! |
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strange world harry's in i hope you answer all the quiestons soon but i love it a lot!! |
Author Feedback: All the questions will be answered, but it will be a while. I don't want to rush this fic.
Thanks for reviewing! |
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ZSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 24/03/08
well I never read the first version u wrote but this one is reallly goood, and im really curouis as to wat happened to harry that got him into this other world, I liked how sirius had kids and I really like how hermione and harry are around each other, keep updating as soon as u can, I need to read more |
Author Feedback: haah, I'm actually glad you didn't read the original. I'm almost ashamed at how bad it was.
All will be revealed in time in terms of why Harry is in the world and what the world is.
I'm glad you like how Harry and Hermione are around each other. That of course is one of the key factors in this fic, so if you enjoy their relationship than that of course makes me smile.
I'll try update as soon as I can, and thanks so much for reviewing!! |
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great job!i cant wait to read the rest of it!keep up the great work! |
Author Feedback: Thanks very much! |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 23/03/08
Seems the other Harry hadn't been a nice bloke, and probably too similar to James, being under the old Marauder's direct influence, and that of Sirius too.
I hope he can change his reputation soon. |
Author Feedback: Yep, the other Harry was definitly a bit of a jerk. I think though that if Harry hadn't had the upbringing that he had with the Dursleys and having the life he did, he would be a lot more arrogant, and a lot more thoughtless. And as you said, he had more influence from James and Sirius.
Harry seems like someone who would take a lot for granted if he didn't know any better, and as we know the Potters are neither lacking in money, nor reputation, so it's no surprise he would be that way. Luckily our Harry is not so bad, so he's sure to set things right.
Thanks for reviewing!! |
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I just read this story and I loved it! It's very different from other stories I have read and can't wait to read more. Update soon! |
Author Feedback: Different is what I'm aiming for, so I'm glad to hear you haven't read anything like it!
I'll try update as soon as I can, and thank you so much for reviewing! |
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Please hurry up and update. The only problem with authors rewriting their stories it that I can't read it all in one go. Anyway, it's great just like all of your other stories, and I'm surprised that I haven't read it before. Keep up the good work~ |
Author Feedback: Yeah, and I know it must be more irritating with me being rather unpredictable with my updating. I can't really help that though with university being so demanding on my time, but I will try to update it as soon as I can.
I'm very happy to hear you like it, and thank you so much for reviewing! |
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prettySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/03/08
wow, that was a great and fantistic story! cant wait to see the next one |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/03/08
Of course I plan to stick around. you got me curious. I wonder, though, about what you said in your review reply. If the world where he is now is one where Voldemort has never existed, then his interactions with Ron and Hermione had never been driven by Voldemort and the need to fight him, right? So when you say you don't see the point in having a Voldemort-free world from the start, I can understand you. But then, Harry will now interact with Hermione and Ron just like he would if the story had already started without Voldemort, even if he did face him in his own reality, because in this new reality he's in now, the dark lord never existed and if he keeps talking about him, he will be thought mad. I dunno if I'm making sense here, probably not. |
Author Feedback: Ah, but see this isn't your typical 'unreality' story, as you will soon find out as the chapters progress. I don't want to give it away, because honestly it would ruin everything. In fact I'll just keep my mouth shut about that now, lol.
There will be scenes where you will see the old world though. I'm not a fan of flashbacks, but I will be using them sometimes in this fic to show moments from Harry's world because I think it is necessary. It pains me to write them sometimes- as I said I don't like flashbacks, however I can't escape them in this type of fic.
I think my main reason for keeping Harry knowing what happened is because I want this fic to show that even though Voldemort brought so much pain, he also brought so much good (*Cough*H/Hr*cough*). I hope you enjoy it though, and I am veyr happy to hear I piqued your curiosity! |
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oooh, mystery  I'm looking forward to see what you can do with this. Lots of potential - you were right |
Author Feedback: I'm quite excited to write it actually. I find myself spending all my lectures thinking about what I can do next, and what Harry will find out next, lol.
Actually this first chapter only got updated so early because I woke up early this morning and finished writing it, even though I should have been getting ready for university
I hope I'll live up to your expectations on this though. I'm excited, and if you're looking forward to finding out what happens then that makes me a happy author.
Thank you very much for reviewing!! |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/03/08
Strange first chap. When I read the summary I thought you meant no voldemort from the beginning, not him ending in a different reality after the final battle, you know. And why doesn't anyone talk to him there? Well, I guess the rest of the story will explain it. |
Author Feedback: Well I just never have seen the point in doing a complete different reality fic. To me the Harry and Hermione relationship I love is the one I see united from the characters I see in the HP books. To take them away from their experiences and backgrounds just kills it, as well as killing the characters I love.
As for the rest of your questions, you are right in saying the rest of the story will explain it. It my be a bit odd at first, but the world that Harry is in is essentially a world where Voldemort never existed. That is the world that is explored in this fic, and it will all start to make sense as it progresses.
I hope you plan to stick around for the rest of the chapters  |
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great job! this story sounds like its going to be fantastic!keep up the excellent work on it! |
Author Feedback: Thank you!! I shall try to live up to your expectations
I hope to update this one sometime either this week or next week. I have a few assigments with university I need to do, but this fic is at the top of my writing priority.
Thanks again for reviewing!! |
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OMFG this is an amazing idea
i love it, it's simply perfection
amzaingly original premise with fantastic prose to boot, thsi truly is my luck day
plz update ASAP!!!! |
Author Feedback: Haha, glad you liked it
I'm definitly going to try update this one as soon as I can. I have a few assignments and such I need to do, but this fic is on the top of my priorities in terms of writing.
Thanks for reviewing! |
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