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This chapter is good. I like the concept the story and how Harry is such a nice person to Hermione. |
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yukashiiSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 16/07/08
this is my review that i have to do so i can put this story on chapter alert. |
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MionefanSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 30/04/08
Oh, I just can't wait to see where you're taking this. Harry should take what has happened gratefully, since everyone else in his other world is dead. I know I would. |
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MionefanSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 30/04/08
This is brilliant actually. I notice that Harry wants to confide in Hermione, but still isn't sure where he stands with everyone. I'm going to like this story. |
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MionefanSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/04/08
Wow, this one is really different! Good start though. I'll just have to read through it to see how you deal with all the conflicts this will create with canon. Not that I care too much about how canon turned out. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 11/04/08
Well I enjoy this chapter veary much and I am Looking forword to the next chapter.
As well as the other story called ( Cupid's Lost his wings).
Keep it up the wonderful & Excellent work.
tha tha tha tha tha tha tha tha tha that's all folks!  |
Author Feedback: Glad you liked it!
I'll try update as soon as I can, and thanks for reviewing! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 11/04/08
I love that Harry's mom and Dad are in his life agin, But Ron is a bigot some times but not all the time.
And the thing with Hermione make me what to cry  .
poor Harry, Poor Hermione.
Where is the love that they have for eother?
It's sad |
Author Feedback: Ron will get better, it's still early yet.
It is rather sad for both Hermione and Harry, but it's still only early stages. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/04/08
this a nice chapter I am going to review all of the chapter.
So this a good start.
I can't what to read the next one so I can review it.
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Author Feedback: I'm glad you liked it, and thank you for reviewing! |
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great job! i cant wait to read the rest of this story!keep up the great work on it! |
Author Feedback: Glad you like it, and I'll try update soon.
Thanks for reviewing! |
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Another great chapter!! I love the story as always and I can't wait to read more so update as soon as you get the chance! |
Author Feedback: Glad you like it, and I most definitly will update it as soon as I get the chance!
Thank you for reviewing!! |
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SakamoriSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 09/04/08
Thank you for the chapter. Still need for more. lol Looking forward to the next one and also look forward for this new world 'Hermione' in love with Harry and end up being a couple again. to you. By the way, is it possible that Harry will go back to the old world? just wondering.. anyway love it. Thanks |
Author Feedback: I can't actually say much about it, because the plot of this story is a lot more than it seems. I would hate to spoil it for you.
Glad you're enjoying it though, and I'll try to update as soon as I can.
Thanks for reviewing! |
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This looks interesting  You're saying it's a repost; I must admitt not having read it the first time you posted it, so I'm unfamiliar with it - I am however not unfamiliar with the concept. One of the things that bothers me the most about this kind of stories is that they tend to have Harry bungling around figuring out who's friends and who aren't for a very long time. Thankfully you're hinting at more than that. Will I get to see Harry actually telling people this is not his reality? Will we find out where this reality's Harry is?
Cheers,
Rach |
Author Feedback: You're lucky you did not read the original. It had six chapters and was pretty much awful.
I personally have not read any alternative universe fics because I don't particularly like them. (I know, rather hypocritical), but this one I hope will be different to the others. Since I've already written it before, it's quite easy to follow with it now, and you don't have to worry about Harry bungling about to figure out who his friends are, because I would get rather bored writing that myself. 
I can't let on much of what is going to happen, or what even is happening, because this story is very tricky and anything could give it away. You'll start to see why as the story progresses, and I hope you plan to stick around!
One thing I will tell you though, is that yes, people, or at least someone, will indeed be told that this is not Harry's world.
Thanks for reviewing! |
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EulaliaSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 09/04/08
Hey,
I really like this story because it´s so weird. I really would like to know what happened after he killed Voldemort. But I hope we will know it at the end of your story.
Please date it up fast |
Author Feedback: It is indeed weird, and believe me it will only get weirder.
Because this is such a tricky plotline I can't actually say much about it, but all will be revealed by the end.
I'll try to update as soon as I can.
Thanks for reviewing! |
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I thought this story looked familiar...well I liked the original, and I really like this one as well. Keep up the good work!
Looking forward to more. |
Author Feedback: That's great to hear you're going to stick around to read this one too! The story is essentially the same, but I'll be going more deeper into everything, including the world, as well as the characters. It's basically going to be an enlarged version of the original.
Thanks for reviewing, and I hope you enjoy the rest! |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 09/04/08
I don't quite understand. i mean, Harry should have memories of his friends' deaths in his real world of course, and it would take time for him toa djust to this new world, but what I wonder is why he seem to not want to live there. He has all of them back, he could learn to live with them all and have fun without any worry of voldemort and such, but he seems to be appalled at the idea of living in this other world...  |
Author Feedback: Well how would you feel if you were suddenly uprooted from your world and placed in a world completely identical to yours, with people completely identical to the people you know, yet they aren't really the same people you knew because they didn't share the same experiences? The memories you share would not be the same as theirs; the things you loved and held dear about them don't even exist, because those moment never happened in this new world. In the end you really don't know those poeple at all, and they're just cheap copies of the people you knew. It's sort of like a 'be careful what you wish for' world, where what should seem so wonderful isn't that great after all.
Of course this could just be my own feelings on the matter, for as a writer it's easy to let your own feelings slip into things.
There's also the issue that the Harry of this world is a very real being. There can't be two Harrys, and the Harry we know does not have the right to take that Harry's place.
Anyway, I hope you enjoyed the chapter, and thanks for reviewing! |
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