WOW...
BEAUTIFUL...
AMAZING....
AND ABOLUTELY PERFECT!
I shed tears...your words touch me
To be honest you have put what i have always thought what was going through in Hermione's head during the whole HG.
I was hurt when Hg happened and You have put the pain that I felt through Hermione.
You are an AMAZING and GIFTED author. This is truely how I wanted the last chapters of DH to be.
I abolutely love the fact that you kept the words "I chose You" constant in the story. because thats what I have always thought would happen.
NO MATTER what or who comes in Hermione's life she WILL ALWAYS CHOOSE HARRY. That's how much she loves harry. The part where she chose Harry over Ron is my favorite part in DH. Because it brought the old Hermione back.
You have put all of the emotions that I have always thought Hermione had in this story of yours.
I can not seem to find the words on how Beautiful your story. Their children are simply gorgouse and I just want to give you a gigantic hug for actually making Ron the way he is. I can not stand it when authors completely trash his character making him hateful and breaking up The Trio.
"a dream where he had been married to Ginny and had three children called James, Albus and Lily. A dream where he didn’t touch his wife. A dream where he didn’t speak to one of his best friends. A dream where he hadn’t wanted his godson to live with them because it would mean his sons would have to share a room. A dream where Hermione had been married to Ron whose insecurities had still ruled his words."----> wow that's some list coming from an epilogue with only several pages.

I'm still angry i really am. But then I come to portkey and find authors like you.

and I am reminded that there are people who disagree with JKR's shallow outlook of love.
Harry and Hermione's Love( or what could have been their love) is one of my fave parts of the Harry Potter world next to it is the Friendship that those three shared. SO A HUGE THANK YOU from me.
Seriously, I might jus bake you a pumpkin pie lol