i loved this story! its one of the best ive read in a long time!  brilliant writing! |
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vlbuehleSigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 29/06/08
Personally, I find it both amusing and insulting (depending on the day) that JKR wrote the series and was incapable of finding and sticking to believable pairings to the point where she had to lop on an epilogue spelling it out to us. That says more to me about how well those characters fit together than anything else. I enjoyed Harry's analysis of his "dream"--I had to go back and reread the epilogue again in light of it, and found that it was very easy to interpret it that way. Great "fix" of a rotten plot device, thank you! |
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ErasigmaUnsigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 07/06/08
Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant! Exactly how things should've been. Thank you so much for writing this. It made my world so much happier for the time I spent reading it. |
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lampessaSigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 08/05/08
Evil Epilogue as coma dream works for me!
I love how Harry and Hermione's later question and answer sessions came down to "They made me choose"
Well done. |
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lampessaSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 08/05/08
I don't hate Harry. I think Hermione did a number on him with that "I know you'll never love me but I must have you" tripe. Having seen RW women do this type of thing to guys in order to try to work their way under their skins, I tend to despise that particular ploy. Hermione kept telling Harry that he was meant for Ginny, then took him to bed. So, do friends put the sort of pressure on their best friend that causes them to cheat on their girlfriend? It takes two to tango. It also takes two to get into a big fight. Sure Harry behaved abysmally when they argued, but frustration will do that to a person. Hermione had tied his emotions in knots and he'd wasted plenty of time on Ginny after he'd already realized they would most likely not seriously improve their relationship because Hermione told him to and he trusted her, so he tried. Perhaps Harry thinks he finished it, but Hermione started it when she took him to bed. How could anything good come of it? |
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alakazamSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 16/04/08
That was perceptive of Ron to notice that Harry and Ginny do not match. It came as a surprise to me that a boyfriend was introduced. But all is well. I dread to read how Ginny turned out to be! |
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alakazamSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 16/04/08
They really are acting out of character. But i like it. It is quite mellow, not as aggressive and confrontational as some stories. This is nice.  |
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Aww, yay, I love this story!! I started reading it like a while ago, but never got a chance to finish it, it was always late at night or right before I had to be somewhere so it's taken me forever to finish it, and I'm so glad I got to finally!! It was great, keep up the good work!! |
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I truly enjoyed this entire story - from the nightmare of a dream, to the happy ending it turned out to be. Just wish that the canon turned out just as well!  Looking forward to reading more of your work! |
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 24/03/08
Now that was a good wrap-up to your story and a delicious sedn-up of the canon "Epilogue". I do like where both Harry & Hermione Potter have ended up and I love their kids. Ron & Luna clearly make quite an excellent couple and we can hope that Ginny eventually finds the right guy for her (*wicked chuckle* be rather amusing if that guy turned out to be Harry's oldest son a few years down the road). |
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Great!! Ive enjoied it so far! He was dense and all, but then again... wheres the fun without any doubts and problems alon the way???
LOL
Thanks! |
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AshlieUnsigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 21/03/08
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 21/03/08
Wow, such a great story!
I am sorry I missed it, but in a way it is nice to read it all the way through. I loved how you filled in the blanks of what would(should) of happened after the final battle. The progresion between friendship and love between Harry and Hermione was so, so, well done. I also loved Ron and how you handled his character. I have read a few of these post war fics and they never turn out right. You have managed to hit the nail on the head if you ask me. And I enjoyed your take on the whole "nineteen years later" thing.
Wonderful job once again.
Jabba |
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Cas121689Signed | Chapter : 8 | Date : 20/03/08
i would curse a lot [in a really good way, trust me] right now, but its almost four am and i'm tired and i am afraid it would be too explicit for the internet.
in all seriousness though, this story was bloody wonderful. Absolutely a complete and utter ride. I can't even tell you how much I liked it. AMAZING. |
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