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I LIKED THIS STORY ALOT BUT WHERE OH WHERE IS THE REST OF IT AND I LOVED THAT SOMETHING IS GOING ON WITH LILLY AND NOONE WILL TELL JAMES!!!! GREAT CLASSIC!!!! |
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What indeed did that mean? It's an interesting look at Lily, I haven't read a story like this before. Most people make her overly damaged, but as James said earlier, she still is the same as ever. I'm very interested to find out exactly what is wrong with Lily and if she'll ever speak to James in this story. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 01/06/08
Aww, poor James, he must be frustrated to not know what's going on with Lily...if only his friends would tell him...  |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 26/05/08
Well, I guess Lily is wrong, Quidditch is a career, just like any other professional sport. |
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piper_09Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 08/04/08
ohhhhhhhhhh.........rejected this is another good chapter!!!!! over all its a good story but you kind of seem to be going nowhere! but its good all the same! keep writing!!!!  |
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piper_09Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 08/04/08
oh wow , i can imagine that that is how they talked, this is another good chapter!. Keep writing!!!!!!! |
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piper_09Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 04/04/08
this is a really good chapter!!!!!!! i especially liked the "Not that James stalked her or anything. ' part becuase he knew everythign about ehr, and the fact that he wrote his whole entire paper on her!Keep writing!!!!! |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 08/03/08
He's not making any progress, uh?  It's funny, and at the same time frustrating, so I hope next chap he manages to start breaking through her. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 03/03/08
Well, now I really want to know what's wrong with her, you know. |
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KatyUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 03/03/08
I hope you are going farther with this story. It is getting very interesting |
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KatyUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 01/03/08
Ok, I like the story.
I just wanted to get the chapter alert, so hopefully this is 10 words by now. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 28/02/08
he wrote an essay on her? Bloody hell, he's got it bad! |
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ItsLily2USigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 28/02/08
I like this. It's a little short, and very embarrassing for James, but don't we all love that? A blushing James on Lily's behalf is always, always enjoyable. I also like that the update came so quickly! It's not very far into it yet, but I think I like how you write James/Sirius. Good job!  |
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KelseyUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 28/02/08
A bit short, but good! The last line had me rolling! HEHEHEHEHE! Can't wait for more! |
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ItsLily2USigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/02/08
Well... you certainly have my attention, as well as my curiosity. Onto the next! |
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