hehe.. aww that's a cute story. i laughed when i read 'i kissed you' 'i noticed'... i love your writing
keep it up
-megz-

crazily enough, Teddy Geiger has the same shade of eyes that I imagine Harry to have
Thank you for this crazy, alcohol-induced story of crazy observations. It was fun and amazingly cute! Thank you and please write more?

Aww! I've got this silly little girly grin on my face now. My heart is going all tappity-tappity and I think I just melted into a puddle of goo!

I haven't seen the movie you quoted from, but I thought the line was marvelous- all boyish blurting "I kissed you!" and her droll "I noticed."

Thanks for a nice little dessert to my evening!

Heh. Loving more of Harry's tormented inner voice. Must have been quite a shock for the poor lad to wake up and find her straddling him. I have to say, you DO write a sexy kiss!

So, I decided to check out another of your stories because there are thunderstorms rolling through now, and I would much rather be curled up in bed with my laptop than doing-ugh-housecleaning!

I'm glad I picked a Harry POV this time, since the other story I read was Hermione's. I like how you get into Harry's head. I like the slightly inebriated feel to the narrative; it really feels like I'm with him at a party and he's been drinking.

The quote of the Amy Winehouse song did pull me out of the story a bit, because it is such a current pop culture reference that I stopped to think, "Well, it must be 2007 or 2008, so they must be 27 or 28 years old by now..." I think it is just me--I just don't expect that in HP stories.

But it is funny as a line or forfeit in a drinking game!

Oh, I really loved this story. The comraderie and banter between the group is fantastic. I also love the interaction between Harry and Hermione, particularly the scene in the kitchen when she's late for work! Well done!

Damn...


That was Gooood and so ... Ugh!

Gotta read more of your stuff!

Wish I could write as well!

dennisud

Very adult and very soap operay, which is good in this case!
Can't wait to read more!

dennisud

SO. GOOD. Seriously, I love this story. You're quite talented, my friend. Keep up the good work.

That was a really fun story. I enjoyed reading it. And maybe they weren't exactly the Harry and Hermione from the books, but they were a nice variation Thanks for the read.

this was so great!
i loved the way you wrote harry -- confident and calm and free from his usual burdens. it was great. all of the buildup to the kiss and the last scene and the slamming doors and smiling and all of it was just fantastic! thanks for sharing this with all of us!

Ok it's great really. Can't focus on work, must read more

Nice, for so long I didn\'t have time to read some funfictin so now I\'m having a good time.
Btw Hermione gets dress just like me in the morning The same manier

This story was so cute. It really gets a good look at Harry and how some friendships actually grow!

A wonderful character study.
I think you caught their adult personalities perfectly, and the slightly angsty romance was handled just right.