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Aw that was so cute and funny and cute I liked it a lot see ya, |
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piper_09Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/03/08
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww................... this was such a good story!!! A bit short but i loved it non the less. Keep writing !!!!!!!!!  |
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vickieUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/03/08
i love all your stories and this one is no exception. kudos to you.. hehe. im in a good angsty, this was refreshing |
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Oh my GOSH! I totally love this story. It was so adorable, and the whole balloon proposal!? AHHHH!!! I loved it all. You really are a great writer. It was absolutely fluffy and this totally made my day.
Great job!
Love,
Angela  |
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This is really sweet, I like that it seems real. Most auothers don't point out James' faultes after he and Lily get together, either that or his faults go to a minimum. Keep up the great writing!
---Tiger111991 |
Author Feedback: thank you so much, that's verey kind of you to say! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/02/08
This one-shot was really good. I loved it! You are an awsome writer, I hope to see something else from you soon. |
Author Feedback: aw thank you so much, you're really much too kind! |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/02/08
Nice one. I don't think she should have broken up with him though. I'll explain. Yes, in the end he porposed to her. Still, if he hadn't she would have gone on dating Dylan, but she would have never loved him like James, so what was the point in doing that?  |
Author Feedback: well it's juust that they've been together for seven years and she's come to that point where she needs more, but he cant give that to her. she cant stay around hopign to change him, she realizes that much at least, it'll only cause a growing resentment towards him, and she doesnt want that.
sometimes you just have to move on, you cant sit around hopign for soemthign that very well might never happen.
you have to know when to let go
hope that explains my logic, thank you so much for reviewing! |
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