lol. it happens to the best of us.
good chapter. i can't seriously wait for more. all this ust is driving me nuts (and im sure the both of them too). awesome work thus far.

Have you ever heard of the saying "if you want something done right, do it yourself"? well if you haven't, you just did, and i do believe you learned the meaning of that in your reason for why it wasn't updated. 4 months is rediculous, a week or two maybe even three is understandable, but 4 months..common, i sincerely hope you plan to make it up to us by updating regularly, weekly if not twice a week, because this is a good story, but stories lose so much credibility if the author is unreliable for updates.

Drop me a email anytime with anything - story ideas, characters and sure I'd love if you would send the chapters. If you just do some work it'll be really good. But right now it's a bit too cpying and pasting...But I'd be happy to help! You sound really worrried! So just drop me a mail anytime. That's good though that you had a different one. I try saving everything backup. Like in your email or a USB..

xoxo
Hana

I don't know if anyone ever replied to your earlier chapters' question or not but Molly's maiden name was Prewitt, and yes, Lavender is blonde (I assumed you already knew the latter).

wow i almost forgot about this until i saw that you updated. yea it was short, but still an update. will there be more soon? haha i love that dumbledore wants harry and hermione together. thats great. most ive read dumbledore usually manipulate and make the pairings canon. well keep it up

Right umm - I'm fire on the forums so you can drop me a line there or on the email or through the reply. It's a good story but I'm afraid of it being too word for word literally from the book. I think you should keep going because it's a fantastic idea and the possibilities are endless. I'd be glad to help you because I'm afraid if it keeps this way there might be some issues. It's a great story though - so just drop me a line (if you don't have a forum acc just drop me a mail, click on my name and my email is there) again I hope I didn't sound mean

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Hana

I've just finished reading the book (which was bloody fantastic) I hope that you're going to add your own elements to it, because ATM it's following a lot of the book. I don't mean to sound mean but after reading the book it seems awfully close like word for word. I don't want you to get in trouble or something. I hope you add your own things to it and start diverting away from the book a bit and add your own elements to it. If you need help or something I don't mind. I really love the entire idea of this fic. It's great because I loved loved B&C but I'm scared for you with plagiarism issues *worries* But atleast you're not showing the R/Hr part as developed as in the books. I'm happy to help out if you need it. Again i don't want to sound mean but I am scared a bit...it's a lovely idea though! So drop me a PM or something if you do need the help...

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Hana

It's kay! We love you anyway!

Thanks for upgrading again, and I look forward to the next bit =P

Hi. FYI, this fic was recommended this. Have you posted this in FFN (you've asked us if it was okay to copy your PK stories in FFN, right?)? You can post that URL and others in the rec thread (the Link to discussion forum). I'll insert them in the rec-engine data.

Eh, don't worry about doing a fanfiction. This one is completely AU.

I just saw the movie and I was really disappointed at the end of it. I was so sad and crying for the werewolves. :cry2: Poor Wraith and Gabriel... how on Earth did Vivianne choose a meat boy over one of her own kind? How could she do that? He was not worth it! It made no sense. To me that was not a happy ending, it was tragic.... :cry2:

But I hope at least in your story, there will be a happier ending where Hermione chooses her proper mate and ditches the meat boy... Please let the 5 have fun with him? It would really cheer me up to see that rodent shredded...

But if Harry is in the Gabriel part... but then again, this is PK and so it has to end up H/Hr so... that is promising...

Sorry it took so long to review for this. I did read it a while back and didn't have time to review then and it slipped my memory... but when I saw the movie, I rushed back to review and tell you that your story is really good.

Until the next chapter then.


PJ

Oh no, I totally think you should keep writing this, I didn't mean you should stop it at all! It's a wonderful idea and you have definitely got talent. Maybe what you could do is think about what exactly about the book you love so much and go from there. If its the plot, you can do something similar, just change up a few things you can have a full five if you want, cut it down to one or three, change how she meets Ron, instead of going to a concert put them going to a movie - little things like that will give a unique point to the story where it wouldn't be following exactly and use your own dialogue, but you can follow the main plot - werewolf girl falls in love with meat boy while trying to finding herself and role in her pack. Just suggestions, I'd be more than willing to read the next chapter. I can already tell you though, don't hang up the story because it's a wonderful idea and you can definitely pull it off, just need to add your own twist! My e-mail is rainy_creek_blazer@yahoo.com or aim is oneiros lykos if you want to talk further.

I love the story, and I don't mean to sound rude or harsh so if it comes out that way, I apologize. Honestly, I just am concerned for you and don't want a law suit against you or anything.

I think the problem is that you are literally going word for word from the book - almost like you have the book right next to you as you write this and simply change the names and possibly add a few things. It's one thing to go from memory, but when you have word for word paragraphs, then that is plagiarism. I'm honestly scared for you. I would take this story down from here as your first point of business. Then I would go back and basically rewrite everything in your own words. It's one thing to borrow the plot and tweak it to your way (obviously I think you're planning on showing Hermione having more attraction to Harry from the beginning unlike in Blood and Chocolate where her attraction doesn't come for Gabriel until the last chapter really). If you need help with ideas or if you do decide to take it down/rewrite and would like someone to review it, I am more than willing to help. Like I said, I'm just really worried for you and keeping the story up and as is you are definitely lined up for a law suit if this comes into the wrong hands (Annette Kurtis Claus management mainly).

awwwwww.........that's ok i guess........ but anyways this is another good chapter, i've never read the book so i can't judge you for plagarism! again it was a good chapter! Keep writing!!!!!

Aww, it's too bad you're going to take a period of "leave"...I am hooked and I want to know how and when Hermione will finally decide she should stop playing with a human and go for Harry instead...

I'm pretty sure they won't be going for a fanfic writer that is just using her ideas for fun and definitely not for profit. I'm no lawyer but there are a few on this site; hopefully some of them read this story...