this is good, really! i like it. anyways please write more.

THIS STORY IS GREATI REALLY LOVED THIS CHAPTER I DONT THINK THAT U USED 2 MUCH OF THE BOOK

Nice chap, I loved the kiss. Now please write the Ordeal soon!

So Harry finaly had the guts to do it! Was nearly killing me that he was so...passive! He's a wolf, for Merlin's beard! lol
Ow please, just don't take too long to update, this one is damn good!!

I just saw a nasty review done by another Anonymous. Why would anyone feel the need to write something so nasty yet not have the guts to use a name to go with it?

Ignore that nasty person. If they are not patient enough to wait for a story and complain about it being too short of an update, that person can go and read something else.

If I have enough patience to wait, then they can shut up and wait too!

I hate it when people complain about updates not being fast enough or long enough. They have no idea what goes on in RL and so they have no right to say anything about how you write or the time it takes to do it.

You just take all the time you need kiddo and those of us that appreciate you will wait. For those that are rude, they can go do something else besides being nasty to you on reviews.

Hang in there kiddo.

*hugs*

PJ

"You can thank the horrible movie for this update."
- Your joking right? Because if this is the reason you updated that means you weren't planning on updating quiet so quickly, correct?
wow, absolutely unbelieveable!

"I needed to prove to my readers that this story will never turn out like that!"
- How about you prove to your readers that you can actually update within more than 3 months of the last. That would be a good place to start.

"was this chapter better? It didn't follow the book too much, did it?"
- Yes this was way better, for the all of 4 minutes it took me to read it.

i am glad you update and yes the chapter is fine.
no it is not like the book at least not that much and i love and i agree about the movie blahhhhhhh!!! hope you write again soon.

omg i loved that. glad that confessions were said and also heard. like the conversation with neville and harry. and that intense moment in the kitchen. hehe i can see them going at it, then neville surprised drops his cup. glad hes all for it. and yes was terribly disappointed in the movie. good thing i waited til it was on dvd, saved money....

i've never read the book but i like how he just "jumped" her. lol. omg . sexy harry is yummy. thanks for the update!

Ah, so this is the chapter I inspired you to write huh? Good! I'm glad I was able to help some in your writer's block.

Now, you can do me the same favor so I can get busy on chapter 19 of my LotR for you. I am stuck in a debate with myself again about plot direction.

But at least chapter 18 made your creative juices flow in the right direction. and Harry finally kissed Hermione. Too bad Neville has such timing huh?

Oh and I was disappointed with the movie too. I hated how it ended. I wanted her to shred the meat boy and stay loyal to Gabriel. That would have been better in my opinion.

I need to get my hands on the book so I can see how it was supposed to be.

It didn't make sense that Rafe's dad was Gabriel. I guess the movie people thought it would be more dramatic that way. I am guessing it was not that way in the book and that your fanfic won't go that way either.

I am guessing that Alice is in some seriously deep doodoo. It will be interesting to see how Harry deals with her and the 5.

Looking forward to the next chapter.



PJ

This was a really good chapter. you did it again. Is Hermione going tp perticapate in the ordeal? I hope there are a lot of harry/hermione momments in this story. the have a lot of tension which makes thier meetings really good. once again exellent.

Well, it's good to see the story updated, hopefully you can update again soon!

Good job, I love that book, interesting to see how it fits these charries!!

Hey Angel *hugs*

Sorry to hear that RL has been going down the crapper for you lately. If you need anything, you have my email. I'm always hear for you. *hugs*

This was a good chapter. I liked it a lot. I was glad to see update alert for it.

I saw that rude review before I read the chapter and it was nasty of that person to complain about things taking so long to update.

Things in RL happen and it is not always possible to have enough time to write.

Also, would that person rather have you do a rush job on something and put it out on post and not have it complete or all corrected and less than the good quality that time and patience makes?

I bet if you had rushed to try and please the impatient people, they would have found something else to complain about.

Ignore them or tell them to bug off. They have no business being rude.

Take all the time you need to do what you have to sweetie. There is no rush to the next update. It is not a race.

I am looking forward to the next update but I'm not going to sit here and complain about the time it takes to get it because it is worth the waiting.

*hugs* Take it easy Angel.

PJ

lol. it happens to the best of us.
good chapter. i can't seriously wait for more. all this ust is driving me nuts (and im sure the both of them too). awesome work thus far.