AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/10/05
Oh mah Gawd
Im almoest effign cried  You cruel person
I effign loved it though Nice job |
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joyce_b4uUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/10/05
totally completely amazing! brilliiant. every nuance of silent love and parting was brilliant and emotional. total winner. |
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Jade EyesSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/06/05
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wow. that was amazing. their love truly did conquer everything. and they had a little girl! how perfect! honestly, voldemort is an ass for putting harry and hermione through that. to use their love against them is truly evil. but they overcame it. that was beautiful. keep writting! |
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EglaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/04/05
What a beautfifull story with some nice amut too I really loved the last part:
“Meet my daughter,” he said softly. “Lily Ann Potter. She has her mother’s eyes, don’t you think? She is quite a miracle. And you couldn’t stop her from coming to be. I won’t think of you again after this. You can’t hurt us anymore.”
Take that Voldemort you bastard!!! |
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GiancarlaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/03/05
 Oh my God, that was so sad, but so good!  *sniff* *sniff* The story was amazingly poignant, very emotional work! I salute you; it was magnificent. The plot was a usual plot, but the way you took and ran with it was so unique. I felt the hopelessness and agony of the characters. Plus, you got me believing that it wasn't going to end "happily-ever-after"! Great job! I'm off to go read your other fanfiction... |
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This is really a fabulous story you should be very proud of it |
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GiancarlaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/02/05
*sniffle* That was amazing!  You did an amazing job capturing the emotion. You had me sobbing! Great job! |
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NatiFcs28Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/02/05
o wow. man, if you had ended that on a sad note... i mite have had to hurt you. just kidding, but wow. i... wow. speechless. very well written, and very moving.
that was such a good story, and i'm so glad it was a one-shot. i'm not sure my heart would have been able to take all this sadness. poor, poor harry. at least it ended well. it will end well with him, or jkr should go into hiding.
i'd read more of your stories, but i'm out of tissues. truly brilliant.
-Natali |
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oh man, that was so...i don't know how to describe it. you made me cry! sad tears and then happy tears.
i can tell you, i would have been very upset if hermione hadn't made it out of the spirit realm place. damn, voldermort's evil, fucking evil.
great story, you wrote it so well, it was so emotional and just sucked you right in. and it made ME CRY! honestly, that's remarkable because i don't cry.
i loved this one-shot, it was a truly amazing story. |
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lissaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/12/04
I'm so glad you had her come back! I didn't realize when I started reading this it had angst in it! But it was so great! I was actually hoping that she would stay when he brought her back in the beginning...but I like the way you brought her back alot more! I was kind of hoping for them to have a boy..but I can live with a girl! Oh yeah, who was he talking to at the end of the story? Fantastic story! |
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Wow.... wow... what more can I say? This story was breath taking and brought me to tears. I believe you have done an amazing job |
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Mary6707Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/09/04
I think you did a wonderful job with this story. It was so sad and mournful to begin with that it made me ache. Then, you were able to bring back the joy. Very nicely done. |
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ZiggyfanUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/09/04
 I love this story, but you had me in tears through most of it!
I  how you ended it thow!
I can't wait to read more of your stories! |
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Anne USigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/08/04
Oh my. That was brilliant. I'm sitting here with tears in my eyes from the angst and the beautifully-written sex and the whole love story. And the ending just about knocked me off my feet. BRAVO!!! |
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