There's something about this....I don't know. It has a very unique quality to it that's just lovely. I just really enjoyed this story. Nice work.

I love this fic, and I can't believe that only now I'm reading it... Please write some more... you're great, and I will love to know if you have a page in livejournal or something like that to see more of your fics, jeje. Thanks!!

Now that was adorable.
Ahh, Beth, it's good to be back on portkey and good to see you've still been writing! Your Harry and Hermione always do have this great chemistry that not many other authors online have. It just seems so effortless and genuine, it's always a pleasure to read your fics.
Keep up the good work!

Lovely, Darling! It's particularly amazing how their conversation just bounces off naturally. Great job!

I feel like I just intruded on a sweet and tendered moment between the two lovers.

Very beautiful.

Nice, gentle, little story, there that softly demonstrates just how strong and deep their love is for one another. It takes quite some depth to be able to interact like that.

So incredibly lovely It's so simple, but the detail is amazing. Did you mean to put so much symbolism in this? Because it's actually there for any reader to pick out. Very nice!

Always look forward to your writing Keep the love comin'!

much love, jae

I enjoyed it. I'm not sure if I "got" it, but I did enjoy it. The line, "this is all I got", seems meanigful in a I-can't-quite-describe-it sort of way. At any rate, thanks for sharing.

I love it. It's so simple, and just right. It's hard to find these kinds of stories now, and I'm glad I found this one. Great work!

Very sweet. I really like it, you know. A bit short but I guess that was your aim, right?

This was really sweet and funny. And that's what it's really like to be in love. Silly banter and arguments, and day to day life. While I love romance stories, I also love fics that portray reality. Very nice.

That was really sweet, I love their banter. (and I have to admit I was thinking of all the different ways one could throw a pillow!) Really beautifully written.

omg. that was so cute. beh! i loved it. clementine. oranges. anything. pen. pensil. everything. their love is so ggreat. *sigh* now i want to fall in love!

Oooh, cute! *whispers* I remember your contribution to Every3Days, and I always thought it could work great like this

That was cute. I hope to see something else from you sometime soon.