AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 18 | Date : 21/11/08
Hermione is being extremely obnoxious. Her character is over-the-top-stubborn. I know Hermione is like this but she is being completely ridiculous. |
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liamtohaSigned | Chapter : 18 | Date : 18/11/08
Well I guess its safe to say I'm quite interested in this story, I just spent hours and hours (that I should've spent studying for my finals) reading this so needless to say I await the next instalment. Keep going. |
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RowenaSigned | Chapter : 18 | Date : 15/11/08
Wow great chapter. The flowers were so sweet, Harry does seem like the kind of guy that would over do it, but it's definitely cute. Glad that Lavender's marraige is settled, some people just never change. can't wait for Harry and Hermione to see each other again! |
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alayneniSigned | Chapter : 18 | Date : 14/11/08
Interesting, great job with the letters. The next chapter title looks very interesting and I strongly suspect that we will be seeing Tonks again! |
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Oh I hope you make it up for us with all the H/Hr fluffyness the next chapter... how silly of Lavender... let's hope that her marriage actually works... I can't believe I don't remember that bloody thing! I just remember the ending of the movie, oh well... until next chapter! |
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Tank03Signed | Chapter : 18 | Date : 14/11/08
I feel like a heel. I've been following this story from the beginning and I don't think I've yet left a proper review. Shame on me. You have my apologies.
I guess I just didn't want to like the story; it's not a time period I've ever been interested in, and I've never really gone for these kind of a/u stories.
However, your writing is such that I've been completely unable to stop reading. Any good H/Hr story (in my opinion) has to start with characterizations that are believable and recognisable. You definitely have that here. Whether in Regency England or Modern Scotland, I'd recognise these characters anywhere. Kudos for a job very well done. You are handling them with wit, and warmth, and a deft storytelling hand. The fact that you have "won over" a reader who didn't want to read says much about your abilities.
Keep up the great work; this story has been enormously entertaining and I'm very glad you've chosen to share it with us. Cheers!
And again, sorry for not reviewing sooner. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 18 | Date : 13/11/08
Well, I seriously don't understand Hermione. First she thinks that maybe Harry didn't hide the letter for an evil reason and now that he's sending her flowers she's angry at him, for what exactly? Knowing him as I do, I wouldn't be surprised if all the money Viktor now has comes from him...so what the hell has Hermione to be angry at him for? Maybe she should be angry at herself since it was her who overreacted and left him, while he was only doing his best to resolve the situation involving her sister... |
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Angel 737Signed | Chapter : 18 | Date : 13/11/08
Another great chapter! You are AMAZING!
Werewolves of London... Remus maybe...
I cant wait to find out! Please update again soon! |
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great job! i cant wait to read the rest if this story! keep up the excellent work on it! its fantastic! |
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yeah I was kinda wondering if by chance luna or somebody else would walk by and catch hermione having a one-sided conversation with herself (well, let's at least HOPE the other half wasn't out loud! lol?)
oh I wish harry would just show up.
and I hope there's nothing wrong with aunt aurora visiting lavender. I just feel like something's not going to be right with that trip or... something... I dunno...
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Kandy123Signed | Chapter : 18 | Date : 12/11/08
poor poor hermione shes so torn up in side.  maybe she'll figure everything out eventually update soon |
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alayneniSigned | Chapter : 17 | Date : 04/11/08
Great chapter. I thought you said hardly any Tonks!!!!! I'm ready to strangle her myself.
Poor Harry. He really has gotten himself into a mess. I wonder if Dobby is baning his head against something for telling "Miss" about the letter!
I'm curious how come Harry didn't ask how she found out about the letter. |
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talianneSigned | Chapter : 17 | Date : 25/10/08
This fanfic is amazing. I love Pride and Prejudice, and the way that you have woven it through Harry Potter is awesome. Well done!! |
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stupid Lavender, I want to throttle her as well lol I don't remember what happens in the real story! So I guess I'll have to wait until you get out the next chapter... until then! |
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