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BenRG

Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/02/08

A nice, fluffy story. You write hormonal!Hermione very well. I also like the concept of a playboy Ron. It was never credible that he would settle down soon after Hogwarts (I think JKR recognised that when she made Ron and Hermione's family younger than Harry and Ginny's).

The nice part of this story is how you show the side of Harry that doesn't always come out in H/Hr stories. Yes, Harry is a hero and a leader, but he is also a very gentle and tender person when his friends are in need.

A nice touch that Hermione likes her new surname. A nice antidote to all those uber-fem!Hermione characterisations that have her refusing to follow that tradition.

Author Feedback: A nice, fluffy story was exactly what it was meant to be, so I'm glad you liked it! Thank you.

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sakura_txell

Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/02/08

Very sweet... but kind of OOC for Hermione... But I guess pregnancies can do that to women!
Congrats for this short story!

Author Feedback: Yes, a bit OOC, but she *was* addled by hormones. Glad you liked it.

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