Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/07/08
Well, I'd say the two Weasley aren't that nice in canon. Well, they wouldn't be if put in this situation. But anyway, nice fic!  |
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MioneluvSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/02/08
There's no need to apologize for fluff, because I love fluff. I live off of it. It feeds my soul with how things could be if life were perfect. Since it's not, stories like this are a way to get a glimpse of it. Quite frankly I loved it. |
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/02/08
That's a nice one-shot, with Ginny being smart enough to realize that she needs to move out of the way and Ron being intelligent enough to know himself, and Hermione, and not make a right mess of things. It was a nice, gentle, and enjoyable story. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/02/08
I liked this a lot. Its always refreshing to change the way the Weasley act. Its different and made the story more interesting. |
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Amazing story!!! I could potentially see the younger Weasley's acting like that, especially Ginny. |
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Cute story - it was kinda refreshing to see Ron and Ginny as being somewhat mature instead of the whiny Weasleys that we all know. Nice job. |
Author Feedback: *falls to her knees* THANK YOU!!!!! You're the first that actually liked it, others kind of were irritated by their apparent 'OOCness'.
So your review was very appreciated. I will confess I am going back and still editing this shot every once and a while, just to be sure it's actually good since most of the reviews sucked. Your nice review made my day. |
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mow09Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/02/08
well..first..
hi..
i really liked the story..it was sooo romantic and sooo amazing..it was really ROMANTIC!!
it's just that it wasn't actually that clear and i didn't feel harry's love for hermione that much it was as if he was a bit forced or obliged to love her, but was he??
i guess i maybe i just wasn't able to get the message but over all it was amazing...
keep up the good work and to tell you the truth i was REALLY REALLY touched!!
mow09  |
Author Feedback: Lol. I'll actually admit I have been reworking it to add in more of Harry's feelings. Hopefully when it's redone it will come through better.
He was supposed to love her but not understand how he was feeling...until he eavesdropped and had his conversation with Ginny. (Ron's an added bonus of course.) So we'll see if I can do that soon enough. |
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Oh my God, what a beautiful piece of writing. Please write more stories like is one! It was just brillant. |
Author Feedback: Lol, I'll never stop writing. Thank you for the compliments! |
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SAPPY in the starting
but the ending of the chappie was quite good but
i guess RUSHED(sry)  .....
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Author Feedback: Lol, no problem. Truthfully I am a college student and I was up until midnight writing this. I had to end it!
So I do believe I am going to rework it-I've gotten comments about the oocness (whatever?) and the overall lack of plot. That said...the oocness stays and the ending gets reworked. |
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fledgeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/02/08
Somewhat of a new take, as far as Ginny is concerned, at least. And it will most likely not agree with the image of Ginny many of us have, but nevertheless a beautifully told story, and Hermione, of course, is dead on.
Your feeling is correct - this sort of fic does not require a follow-up of any kind, better to start something new, at any rate. |
Author Feedback: I got tired of seeing Ginny and Ron always portrayed as the jealous ex-lovers...I know some people like seeing them that way and hate how I portrayed them but tuff cookies. It's what I wanted to happen. Fanfiction is an exploration of what COULD have happened.
So Thank you for being open minded enough to like it. |
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CibblerUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/02/08
This is one of those makes you smile stories. Especially the line where Harry asked will you go out with me.
Good, very good  |
Author Feedback: I luuuve feel good stories! Thanks for the review~! |
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well. i just read the other persons comment and don't listen to them. i have toadmit. you did rush a bit buti think it was very fluffy! i am gonna read other stories of yours now!  |
Author Feedback: Well thank you. I am going to go over this...and I don't believe that fanfiction has to be truly canon so I guess I don't mind their reviews too much. *grumbles*
I swear, just because I do a different twist than other fan fic authors I get bad reviews. *throws hands up*
But thank you for loving it anyway. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/02/08
meh, this story was lacking and seemed forced, you made the characters ooc, especially ron(understanding?) and being a good decent friend. That's just weird, also ou didn't even have any real progression to move fluidly from one part to another it was all oh it's over where's hermione i love her the end. Yeah crap storytelling tho grammar and sych wasn't bad. |
Author Feedback: 1. Welcome to Fanfiction. It's not weird...it's my version.
2. that said; Welcome to my way of playing with the HP characters.
3. You're welcome to stop reading if I offended you by doing something different.
This is a fluffy one shot that probably lacks in plot, that's the point of overdone fluff. Sorry if you were disappointed. I don't have time to post any chapter stories with plot and intrigue. (Rest assured they're sitting on my desktop, I just can't deal with people demanding things and cutting me down when I have essays to write and couldn't be bothered.) |
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