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Bren
Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 06/04/08
Yes you're soo mean!!!!!!!
Can't wait for the next chapter!! xD
pleease post more son!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 06/04/08
no you cant just leave it like that, meanie. love it though...wonder what hes going to say that she found out what hes doing. he should just kiss her to make her stop asking questions. then they will have this secret affair. make everyone think its not going well when it actually is. great work.
 

VipyGirl831
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 05/04/08
Haha. I really enjoyed seeing Harry attempt to charm Hermione. Very entertaining. Good luck with the morning sickness! Don't worry about not updating super quickly. I always feel it's better to take your time and produce a better chapter. ^^
 

Churros are Good
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 05/04/08
Haha. Hermione's too smart for her own good. Ha, she wasn't supposed to know! Ha. She always has to ruin plans, right? Anyway, great chapter. I can't wait for you to continue, so continue soon! So anyway... yea, just continue VERY VERY soon, and I'll be happy.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 05/04/08
That was cruel and how the hell is Harry supposed t o respond to that cause we all know he isn't exactly smooth. But excellent chapter all the same.
 

harperkidzmom
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 05/04/08
Maybe she has no choice?? Does old Voldy have her parents somewhere? Ginny is as childish as I imagined she would be.
Author Feedback: You will find out what happened to Hermione in the near future but I think she needs to get a little close to Harry before she blurts out her whole entire story to him, if she does at all

As for Ginny well I am not a massive fan of her but she does see a little white light (no not death) soon enough
 

harperkidzmom
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/04/08
Sorry, I'm not quite sure I like the idea of a "death eater" Hermione. THe language is a bit too much for the character. We'll see.
 

Harry85
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 05/04/08
oh boy, she figured him out in few minutes time, brilliant!
 

NicholePotter86
Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 05/04/08
Hey! That was a great chapter, short but great. I absolutley love this seduction idea. It makes me squeee just thinking about it. I think a little more insight into what Remus is thinking and maybe a funny scene with Tonks all over him would be a great addition. Congrats on the new baby news BTW! Update again as soon as you can. Until then, Byes
Author Feedback: I think that I might be able to add a bit of Tonks and Remus. Seeing as the story is mainly in Harry's POV I might just have him work in or something.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 31/03/08
Wow. Really good. Harry seducing Hermione. I really want to keep on reading. Update soon.
 

Larissa
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 31/03/08
Hey this is great!! I thought i'd never see the day harry would fall for a death eater...lol
And Hermione with a foul mouth is just hilarious...I'm sure that if she was really bad she would have reaaaally bad words to throw at good guys...lol
So, keep up the good stuff and pleeeeeeeeease, update ASAP!!
 

NicholePotter86
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 30/03/08
Hey! OMG I dont usually read Evil Hermione stories but I think this one is going to be awesome. I just cant wait for the seducing to start. LOL Ginny should know by now that Harry is not that into her and that she should get her own little death eater, possibly Draco Huge Fan! Sorry, anyways please update again very soon so the fun can begin. Until then, Byes
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 30/03/08
UPDATE PLEASE!!! this is gettin good!! i really like it and hope you update VERY SOON!!!
 

lnkmstr10
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 14/03/08
Seducing Hermione? Doesn't seem too hard for Harry, haha. Love the story so far. I read Harry85's challenege, and I'm glad some one has taken it. Wonderful story so far! I can't wait to read more!! Update soon please
 

stardust0607
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 04/03/08
I already love this story!!!!!!! Omg!!! Its so interesting!!! So many questions omg! Can't wait update!!
 

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