well that was a cute little one-shot...and hot too and you said there was no plot or anything and sometimes those are the best ones to read...take your mind off of things

Very cool. I LOVED the kiss they share after shagging. It's very romantic and, as is said in the text, NOTHING like what had come before. It's a first kiss in every way, and makes my inner romantic SQUEE! Keep up the great work!

ok. you're one of my favorite authors now...
keep up the good, no, great work!

All I can say is WOW!! This story...WOW! Very well written. It was smut but with feelings involved.

That was lovely, darling! And very heated . I loved the transition from one part to another, so I commend you on that.

Great Job!

amazing!! it was so sensual and yet so romantic and completely H/Hr.

Brilliant Story!!!!! Top Quality!!!! I Truly loved every bit of this!!!!! You really are a talented author!

Good one shot....don't really read one shots. Mostly cause I want to read a story that has time for everything. Angst, comedy, drama, and conflict...somehow I just feel like that's too much to put into a one shot and have it still be well written and developed. But like I said just my perspective, no intent to offend. That said...once again good story, well developed, and in character. This is how I see Harry and Hermione getting together. Completely by accident and realizing its been there all along. Like they say love is blind.....

*wicked laugh* Smut, perhaps, but it's definitely well-written and with a quite emotional content as well as the more arousing content. I could easily see this happening as he manages to put the War and his past fully behind him and embrace his future, esp. his future with Hermione. 'Twas a nicely done move by Luna to set them both thinking along those lines, but what else would you expect from her?

I have loved all of your stories and I must admit, I was looking for some good Harmony smut - but this one was not only hot, hot, hot, it was romantic, too. Thank you very much and I hope you update Truth soon!!

Pretty, even if it was pointless. I've always loved your work, so pretty much everything you write is okay by me. As always, I wasn't disappointed.

Keep up the good work!

Brilliant! I wish I could write scenes like that. Smut seems such an inaacurate word for what you've written here. If it's smut, then it's smut at its best, tasteful and still erotic but deeper.

The depth of your story is powerful. We can easily see the developed friendship, longing desires, deep lust and the beauty of the moment when love is first expressed.

In the ordinary story, the reader can see the love. In your story, the reader feels every nuance, texture, sound, taste, smell, etc. This is how good you are and I hope you don't spend all your time writing fanfiction. Although I thoroughly enjoy your work, you have real talent and need to be using it to your financial success. I can only imagine what you could create in the length of a book. Oh my heart, be still.

Wonderful. Absolutely fabulous. You should start on a chapter story. Love the one shots, but I'm seriously looking forward to you writing a really long, several chapters story. You'd have no trouble with it I'm sure.

~!~AkumakoRonso

pls write more fics like this!ur style is so good..nice smut plot. hot hhr..delicious harry,seductive mione. fic length just rite.language brilliant.

I don't know how you manage to do it so consistently, but I'm very glad that you do. This was another winner to add to your collection of totally entertaining and well done stories. Thanks for sharing.