you have got to write more. you are a good writer.

peter. such an idiot. ooh, looks like lily is seeing james in a new light, a new side to james. i suppose they weren't really friends, so they couldn't really get to know each other well.
real life does get in the way, but update when you can!!

Well, it was nice to see an update. I guess Lily is in for a real shock, if she thought that bad of James. And what she said WAS hurtful, considering that out of the four of them he was being the most considerate when she came in with only a towel on.

oh my lanta. i love it.
please please pleaseee write more soon!

haha. it's so funny!! i'm assuming lily found the marauders. and that lily's parents signed a contract that they can't remember, since snape gave them either a memory charm or a forgetfulness potion. lily & 5 guys. fun!!

Please write the next chapter as soon as possible. this is a great story!!!

I didn't see any obvious mistakes. But then, as long as they aren't pathetically glaringly obvious, I usually manage to skim over them. Poor Lily. I'm kinda bummed that the Mauraders are finding a way to move in with Lily. That would be so far beyond funny, with the non-stop Severus baiting. lol.

Oh man... I. I just... LOL. This is going to be hysterically funny, isn't it?

ohhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!! another good chapter it was really funny at the end. and her description of the bad dream . It was really good over all. by the way i read your other story it started with a baby and that one was really good too and blood and chocolate is going good too! KEEP WRITING!!!!!

Hello!!!!!!!!! Sorry this took so long you know school and stuff! but i don't think this is a filler chapter because it shows how the four of them go there to Lily's house. but this is still a good chapter i like the end where he goes "I get to flirt with Lily" that part is hilarious! Keep writing!!!!!

hanger!!!!!! i hpe there's more. i just gotta know what happens.

better and better. every chapter a totally hanger. the more i read the more i want to keep going.

totally hanger. i love those kind. it just makes me want to kept reading.

omg the story just kepts getting better. i cant wait for the next chapter.

oh my god your story is soooo good. normal i wouldn't be here but the one .com i was using is updating. but any way im glad it is other wise i wouldnt of found your story.