Well, the ending was good. It did wrap it up nicely. I do think it progressed just a little too fast, but I liked it. Very interesting to read that Hermione mounted Harry in class..poor children.

This was very short. I did like it. I wish that Hermione could've stayed angrier, but it does make sense. I wouldn't think that they would've had sex so soon.

Well this is really interesting. I would like to know why Harry left and how Hermione coulld kiss him so easily. I hope there is more to come!

This seems very interesting. Would like to know why Harry got a divorce and such. Lovely start to this story.

"She had finally overcome her sporadic cravings, but then her libido shot through the roof. The memory of her walking into his class, pushing him over onto the desk, and mounting him, would haunt him to his dying day. Fortunately it had been a class of seventh-years, who at least knew what they were seeing. They still humbly requested to be obliviated, but it could have been much worse." OK thats one of the funniest things I've read in a while, Good job.

PapaMidNite

esteemed cosmopolitan411?-- i like it lol

so anyway, very interesting route... not what i expected (although, admittadley, i'm not all that perceptive given that you made it quite clear with your last chaps that it'd be at elast soemwhere along these lines)

this was just one fo those thigns where you dotn know where you stand with it

on one hand it's an amazing premise and this was deffinitley, in many ways, an original and unorthodox approach to it. but, then again, it was also a bit unerving seeing how many thigns harry was able to get away with it

ah.... i give it 8 to a 9 out of ten (fluxuates from tiem to time given my mood)

casnt wait for the other version though, i simply adore your prose and this fic has proven to me that regardless of the choice of development, in regards to the plot, i cant help but adore your writing lol

p.s. she actually said wealey 3 times... and granger twice
p.p.s. just b/c harry doesnt want to hear the story as to howthat whole ting came about doesnt mean that we, the readers,m dont lol

Good story. nice ref to the Simpsons, although some names I did not get.

Well, yes it was kind of quick, but I liked it all the same, so good job here

Ok...why exactly did Harry leave Hermione again? Please don't tell me it was the noble hero b.s. cliche.

This really wasn't explained all that well...and I think it was pretty central to understanding the characters.

~Matt

Another good chapterI'm glad they are hooking back up, Harry with all that bs leaving Hermione like that, But hopefully all will end well.


PapaMidNite

Well, I liked ths chapter. Although, Harry's stupidity back when he broke her heart is something huge, you know.

I liked it. I can't wait for the epilogue, to see how everything turns out.

Aww... I don't want this fic to be over, it was too good. I'll be looking for your next story though.

oh please dont get me wrong, while i do critique the way that you had ti all play out, i do genuinley enjoy how you always take me off gaurd with your choice of route- even if it may not be my fav you at least do soemthign that few have ever done, and your prose is fantastic

i'd recommend that if you do choose to rewrite it (which'd also be great lol) then you do it as another version rather than totally deleting this one

it'd be really cool to have both of these options out as they are well-writen and there's nothign REALLY faultyt with either one

Hermione is making it to easy for Harry. He hurt her badly and betrayed her trust and heart. I don't think she should so easily be letting him back in. Instead she should be making him earn her back and I have yet to see any real remorse from Harry at the pain he caused her. I love Harry and Hermione but so far I am having a hard time feeling that Harry deserves to have her. However, I have hopes that as the story progresses I will be changing my mind.