ARGH! Noooo! I reached the end of the chapter and i freaked out when i didn't see a 'Next' button to click on!  You HAVE to update! Please im begging you!
This is really good. Keep up the good work! |
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nichunSigned | Chapter : 13 | Date : 10/08/08
excellent! i love this. i can not wait to read more. added to stories alert |
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those who are still reading this story are still waiting for that next weekend to get here... |
Author Feedback: I'm terribly sorry. Unfortunately, I did become bogged down with work once again and so have had very little time to myself!  However, this week I have managed to get some writing done, and may have the chapter up this week. Thank you for waiting! |
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Free28Unsigned | Chapter : 13 | Date : 16/06/08
Ahhhh great chapter! Seriously I'm happy about Ron living but please dont make him a squib!! cant wait for the next chapter |
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yay! the truth is out... now what will our favorite couple do about it? |
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I am still rather taken with this story. The worst part about the DH: Epilouge was the pairings. There are so many fanfic's of Ginny where I absolutely love her, and would love for her to end up with Harry. Sadly the Canon Ginny was very much like yours, a fan girl, even after everything with the Chamber of Secrets and everything else. And the whole beast in his chest sounded like Lust not Love. JKR did not do enough to convince me that those two belonged together. As much as I hate to see Ron left out, Harry and Hermione were the logical conclusion. Thank You, I can not wait for the rest of the story. |
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InterludesUnsigned | Chapter : 13 | Date : 02/06/08
It's a great story, hopefully the next chapter won't take too long. Keep up the good work. |
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This was a very wonderful chapter, and I myself thought Ron as a squib is actually better then killing him off... and how he asked for help, a breaking point, in my opinion.
The Harry/Hermione and Hugo/Lily action was good here, especially the HHR action. I lvoed how you made them all intereact with one another, especially at the end,
Wonderful job. |
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gravacorUnsigned | Chapter : 13 | Date : 30/05/08
Ron is one that would get himself in a mess for being jealous. Only one correction, if interested. You had Hermoine apparate without a wand, which is not possible. |
Author Feedback: Oh- thanks. I never actually knew that before! I suppose we learn something new everyday then eh? Thanks again. |
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Angel 737Signed | Chapter : 13 | Date : 30/05/08
I dont know if you watch One Tree Hill, but the ending with Ron going to his mother made me think of that. There is something like that in one of the episodes. I really liked that part. I might go watch it again after this!
This was an amazing chapter. Dont worry about not updating. I'm pretty sure that everyone will understand. |
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2 cliffies .. in the same chapter?!?! what were you thinking..  *teehehe* great chapter.. by not killing off Ron but having him have to seek out help if he wants to move on in life will make the story more complex ... but in a good way  I'm glad you didn't off him .. now your story will have jst that much more depth  can't wait for the next chapter!!
ramble on
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hpfan2009Signed | Chapter : 13 | Date : 29/05/08
I love this story. Hope to see more very very soon. |
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 oooo what's gonna happen next?!  another brilliant chapter...can't wait to see what hapens to Ron though...very happy you're not killing him off...that would not go down too well...not with me anywayz! keep up the good work! |
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gingercatSigned | Chapter : 13 | Date : 29/05/08
Finally Harry and Hermione are on the same page....hopefully something will go right for these two
I agree with you Saving Ron. He has been a Jerk, but he made a mistake marrying Hermione and now he has a 2nd chance to step up and be the man He should be....not the Harry Potter clone he has tried to be. He needs to fix things with his kids and Hermione. Ron and Hermione are great friends....hopefully they will find that again.
If someone needs to die in this story.....Let it be Ginny  She is just too horrible for words  She makes Ron look like an angel.
Looking forward to the next chapter |
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