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i think the story rocks and the idea is really creative. no one would really thought on making this kind of fic..u rock!!! |
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OMG! i rlly thought it was hermione in the car! and its obvious that harry knows that the woman likes him.  |
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sertadSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/02/08
I thought the girl was a drugged up Hermoine for a minute or two there; I was so relieved when it was not her. |
Author Feedback: Yeah, so did a few other people.  I'd be pretty relieved too.
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RIOT!Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/02/08
Hahaha like that name? I'm not going to flame you like I got flamed today. They were way out of line. But who cares?
I know this review is...a bit late.
The story was insane kind of like you. haha. And you say you can't write. Please you are so much better than me.
Well I have to get back to one of my many stories i have to finish. I already finished LAWR whoo! I finished it right when you got off too haha.
ttyl
Jenn |
Author Feedback: Look what Crookshanks dragged in.
I don't mind it being late.
Thanks for the review, Jenn! |
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i lost like 50 iq points lol that was hysterical especially the ending!!! you write gryffindor high over at ff.net right with ummm i forgot but that one person..  but good job |
Author Feedback: Thanks! I don't write it with her, I just sort of help her out whenever she's stuck.
Thanks! |
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Wow. I think i did lose some iq points. I was like where is this story going. I'm glad that Harry and Hermione were together and the girl didnt take it personal. All in All I was confuse. |
Author Feedback: Haha, I'll take that as a good sign.
Thanks for reading! x3 |
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meUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/01/08
really, I though that the person speaking is hermione and when it was revealed that Harry was walking towards his house with his child i went: "OMG! they're not going to end up together! He's a married man!"... but when it became clear, I ended up laughing... wow, this is highly original....heehee |
Author Feedback: And we have yet another person thinking it was Hermione! WHOO!! Too bad Hermione isn't a stalker. Oh well, haha.
Thanks. Harry and Hermione are HAPPILY (in ALL aspects of marriage  ) married and aren't going to leave each other, EVER.
Thanks again! |
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Haha. That made me laugh. It's funny what comes out when you write whatever you're thinking. |
Author Feedback: Yep. Glad it made you laugh.
Thanks for the review! |
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Interesting, I thought the female in the beginning was Hermione but she did seem to be a little strange stalking Harry. The one thing that would make the story complete was if she introduced herself as Ginny right before Harry reveals that Hermione is his wife. |
Author Feedback: Haha, basically everyone thought it was Hermoine, but gladly you realized it wasn't.
Ginny... haha, I was actually thinking that, but I was like, 'nahh, I'll just pretend she's off in Alaska sledding with the dogs.' But if you want to think it was Ginny, then go right ahead; I was vague enough, I hope, to let you choose who it was--whether it be some random muggle, or even Ginny.
Thanks for the review!!!won!!!1111!!!!one!!!!onezies!!!!eleventies!!!!whee!!
Sorry. I just sniffed my perfume.
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 I loved this story! I really thought that Hermione was the girl in the car for a moment, then when it came to her shouting \'come out here and fight me\' i was like- thats not Hermione I was glad that they were together in the end though! So Phew...great story, update even after time soon...
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Author Feedback: You're not the only one that thought that; like 7 other people did too. Or maybe 9. Somewhere around there, haha.
It is Portkey, right? I wouldn't upload a random parody for your amusement. Okay I would, but you know what I mean.
I'm on page ONE of Even After Time! WHOOO!!!
Thanks for the review! |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/01/08
Awww, I was hoping the girl in the car was Hermione...that would have been interesting.  |
Author Feedback: Haha, Hermione being married to Harry whenever Harry was actually married to Hermione. Interesting.
"I married Hermione."
"But I'm Hermione!"
"Yeah, but I married HERMIONE."
"BUT I AM HERMIONE, YOU BABOON!"
"You ARE Hermione!" *incredulous look*
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hahaha that ws really cute! i thought hermione was the narrator all along but i guess i was wrong, huh? great job- really funny |
Author Feedback: So did many other people, actually... I always thought it could be Ginny's twin Jenny, but I dunno, apparently Ginny/Jenny turned into Hermione. Eh, whatever, at least we now know it wasn't her.
Thank you! |
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What are you doing working on this and not Even After Time?
Funny story though. Funny because I see myself doing just about the same thing the girl does when she's bored in the car, but without the stalker tendencies. Though I probably would've had the stereo blaring singing off key at the top of my lungs. Just some food for thought. |
Author Feedback: I wrote this a while ago, but I was working on Even After Time, too. Oh well, at least I got a new chapter now (not today, but be on the look out in like two weeks maybe).
Ahh... I love banging my head to music, and drumming the beats on my thighs with my fingers. So much fun. I like food. Haha, I feel so fat now.
Thank you for the review!!!! |
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Author Feedback: Hehe thanks!  |
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Oh dear. Life comes at you fast.
Heh, I love those commercials.
And the traffic jam reminded me of the one where I live. It takes probably thirty minutes to go five feet in front of you in the morning. Just to get to school. Ugh...thirty minutes of my life I will never get back.
But, good story. Very amusing. |
Author Feedback: Same here, actually. I live in a city where the weather is a constant chage and the roads have pot holes which means the people have to fix them, which means delays and road closrues and TRAFFIC.
Thanks, though. |
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