ahhh, oh funny stuff. I definitely hermione right now. that last statement of hers completely made my... night? moment? whatever it was, I enjoyed it
sure it was out of character for a lot of the story (but not all of it, hermione being hermione, factual, and relatively... "innocent," I guess, and harry being a teenage boy (and him also being experienced))

the story wasnt bad at all it doesnt matter that the people were not in character in short stories which are mainly about the sex, what the characters are doesn\'t exactly matter.

love it love it beyond words love it i reread it and cant get enough

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oh lol i didnt see the other two chapters
this is wonderful

oh. my. wow. plz hurry and continue this, lol. its so good!

Another good chapter. The positions seem a bit off though.

Nice chapter. I think Hermione would be the one to initiate the action though.

i liked it and made me laugh at the end. loves it!

dirty harry is hot.

end of story.

awesome job writing by the way

YES! Very good and smutty. You seem to have a knack for this.

This was the funniest sex I've ever read... Really awesome though, I totally could imagine it

I have just started reading this story and i m simply loving it. Thumbs up for u

It was dirty, it was nasty, it was disgustingly intriguing, it was engulfed in perverse curiosity and all in all, it was beautiful. It was as if you took the hidden desires of all the H/HR fans, brought them out of the hidden and locked caverns of our mind, dusted off the cobwebs and made it gleam. It was magical and it was ~sexy~. I know I want to deny loving this, I want to remain innocent and say “sex, wha?” but it celebrated “love” and it was enchanting. I dunno… I’m looking too deep into this aren’t I? It was a simple “F**k fic” and I’m turning it into one of those trashy mushy romance novels.

Whatever. Thank you very much for all of your hard work and please continue to write stories similar to this one really soon. It was (blushes) enjoyable.