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Goodbye, my almost lover

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MiajanE
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/01/08
this is so great

i loved it. I loved how he called her Bex xD

and james' character.
Author Feedback: aw thank you so much, glad to hear that you enjoyed it
 

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midnight ink
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/01/08
This was great- really well written and Bex trying to convince herself was excellent, holding on to hope in such a way it's quite tragic. I think Lupin was a bit harsh but someone needed to tell her!
Author Feedback: i told you i was in a bad mood when i wrote it, nothing like watchign a friend cry all day to get the inspirational heart wrenching fic writing juices flowing (god that made absolutely no sense, did it lol? )

anyway, glad to hear that you enjoyed it, when i finished it i wasnt sure if i even liked it or not, but ecided to go for it anyway, so glad to hear that at least someone was able to appreciate it

p.s. someone had to tell her the truth, and usually it only gets through if it's done so harshly, bluntly-- sadly, such was not the case with our poor bex
 

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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/01/08
It was a really good one-shot. I wasn't sure who's view it was from at first. I thought that it was Lily's at fist but you surprised me with how you did it. It was awsome. I hope you are able to write something else really soon.
 

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Harry85
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/01/08
Well, it's different...and somewhat itneresting...might have been better without those four last lines though.
Author Feedback: i dunno... i was in a bad mood, just wrote it lol

will look back at those last fourr lines though, esp. seeing as i'm going to be putting this through major revisions during the next few days
 

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