Giggles!Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/06/08
gawsh, george! what type of perv are you? gah, but this is more classy than the one i read so...i can give it an A+! |
Author Feedback: the classy type 
You know...the one who can actually write smut  |
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*hyperventilates*
So intense.
*sing song voice* lovee it!
Specially cuz you dont really know who is who...
Agha!
I still havent recovered yet.
Yes, it was THAT good.
*kisses*
~Moony |
Author Feedback: Hey,
Glad you enjoyed it...or rather, lived this story. 
I don't write smut too too often, but when I do, I make sure it's unique and special.
and I know it was THAT good...would have I posted it otherwise?
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AshUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/04/08
I've just read "a firey affair" and it was good. really good. but I have a few questions, who is the third person? is it supposed to be the reader? why is it an affair if Draco and Ginny are together? |
Author Feedback: Yes, the third person is the reader - you, in fact. And the word affair isn't used in the classical sense of cheating...here, affair means doing, or a meeting, in the sense of this story, not cheating behind another's back...does that make sense? |
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naaw, this was really good =D great work... smut is great, and I love it! Damn you for being a great author.. *scowl in jealousy* ah well good for you! and good for us, because then we can read good stories... ^^ |
Author Feedback: Glad you ah...enjoyed it.
Yes, damn me for being a great writer...I can't help it. I like reading smut too, and I agree it's grerat
Thanks for reading. 
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OMG! *grabs ice and runs it all over* That was the most hottest smutlette I have ever read! I bow down to you for your extremely awesome writting skills. Im just hoping that you will pleasure *hint hint* us with the chance to read even more Draco and Ginny smut. Man, I might just have to work off some of this 'energy'. Maybe you could write a part 2 for this fic. That would be sweet. Until then, Byes  |
Author Feedback: I know it's hot...the windows in my room were steamed when I finished writing and the computer was smoking too...
I'm flattered that you think I'm a good writer...this story is a one shot, and I think it will remain as one...but that's not to say my smut writing days are over...A Watery Affair and If Only are the other ones I have, so feel free to read them too.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/01/08
I am dying to know who the third person in the room is. The story is fabulous it took me a little while to breathe evenly. You have an amazing talent and I believe I will need to read some more of your stories. |
Author Feedback: The third person is namely you...the reader. It's what the purpose of a second person viewpoint it...to include the reader in the action of the story...I chose smut because it's the best option for a one shot.
I'm glad you liked the story...thanks for reading and reviewing, and my other stories are a click away... |
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AMANDAUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/01/08
I really liked this story and it different than other stories, especially for it being smut. It made you feel like you were really there in the room. |
Author Feedback: Thank you.
I like to distinguish my writing from everyone else's...second person PoV is a challenge, and hopefully I managed to write it up to standard...
I'm glad you liked it tho...thanks for reading and reviewing. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/01/08
Well that was really quite intersting. I haven't read a fic like that. I really enjoyed it. I have cooled down. Loveely job. |
Author Feedback: Thanks, I'm glad you thought so...it was kind of odd to write though, and might be the only second person PoV fic I do...
Thanks for reading and reviewing. |
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I didn't like it, and it has nothing to do with the fact that it is pure smut. Too many ellipses and the point of view is quite odd; the flow is uneven and I was never quite convinced of its eroticism.
BUT, I have enjoyed many of your other stories, so this is just a minor blip on the radar for me. |
Author Feedback: I know what you mean...I wanted to try a second person PoV...it is difficult to write it, let alone do it well...this is kind of like a pilot story, because writing it in another HP story is way too odd for me...
Thanks for the review. |
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