AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/02/09
I think you were doing screwy things with the point of view in the middle. It made me stop reading. The premise was decent, but the middle section got really, really bad. |
Author Feedback: Apologies for the late reply...
Second person PoV is a screwy thing to do...this isn't my favourite story either, but it was mostly an experiment to see what writing in that style would be like... |
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Giggles!Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/06/08
gawsh, george! what type of perv are you? gah, but this is more classy than the one i read so...i can give it an A+! |
Author Feedback: the classy type 
You know...the one who can actually write smut  |
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*hyperventilates*
So intense.
*sing song voice* lovee it!
Specially cuz you dont really know who is who...
Agha!
I still havent recovered yet.
Yes, it was THAT good.
*kisses*
~Moony |
Author Feedback: Hey,
Glad you enjoyed it...or rather, lived this story. 
I don't write smut too too often, but when I do, I make sure it's unique and special.
and I know it was THAT good...would have I posted it otherwise?
gti88 |
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AshUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/04/08
I've just read "a firey affair" and it was good. really good. but I have a few questions, who is the third person? is it supposed to be the reader? why is it an affair if Draco and Ginny are together? |
Author Feedback: Yes, the third person is the reader - you, in fact. And the word affair isn't used in the classical sense of cheating...here, affair means doing, or a meeting, in the sense of this story, not cheating behind another's back...does that make sense? |
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naaw, this was really good =D great work... smut is great, and I love it! Damn you for being a great author.. *scowl in jealousy* ah well good for you! and good for us, because then we can read good stories... ^^ |
Author Feedback: Glad you ah...enjoyed it.
Yes, damn me for being a great writer...I can't help it. I like reading smut too, and I agree it's grerat
Thanks for reading. 
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OMG! *grabs ice and runs it all over* That was the most hottest smutlette I have ever read! I bow down to you for your extremely awesome writting skills. Im just hoping that you will pleasure *hint hint* us with the chance to read even more Draco and Ginny smut. Man, I might just have to work off some of this 'energy'. Maybe you could write a part 2 for this fic. That would be sweet. Until then, Byes  |
Author Feedback: I know it's hot...the windows in my room were steamed when I finished writing and the computer was smoking too...
I'm flattered that you think I'm a good writer...this story is a one shot, and I think it will remain as one...but that's not to say my smut writing days are over...A Watery Affair and If Only are the other ones I have, so feel free to read them too.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/01/08
I am dying to know who the third person in the room is. The story is fabulous it took me a little while to breathe evenly. You have an amazing talent and I believe I will need to read some more of your stories. |
Author Feedback: The third person is namely you...the reader. It's what the purpose of a second person viewpoint it...to include the reader in the action of the story...I chose smut because it's the best option for a one shot.
I'm glad you liked the story...thanks for reading and reviewing, and my other stories are a click away... |
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AMANDAUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/01/08
I really liked this story and it different than other stories, especially for it being smut. It made you feel like you were really there in the room. |
Author Feedback: Thank you.
I like to distinguish my writing from everyone else's...second person PoV is a challenge, and hopefully I managed to write it up to standard...
I'm glad you liked it tho...thanks for reading and reviewing. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/01/08
Well that was really quite intersting. I haven't read a fic like that. I really enjoyed it. I have cooled down. Loveely job. |
Author Feedback: Thanks, I'm glad you thought so...it was kind of odd to write though, and might be the only second person PoV fic I do...
Thanks for reading and reviewing. |
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I didn't like it, and it has nothing to do with the fact that it is pure smut. Too many ellipses and the point of view is quite odd; the flow is uneven and I was never quite convinced of its eroticism.
BUT, I have enjoyed many of your other stories, so this is just a minor blip on the radar for me. |
Author Feedback: I know what you mean...I wanted to try a second person PoV...it is difficult to write it, let alone do it well...this is kind of like a pilot story, because writing it in another HP story is way too odd for me...
Thanks for the review. |
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